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5/2/2016 c7 mannu-minnie
R u going to write 7 books or end it earlier?

I loved the update that how you are setting for next year also.
4/30/2016 c6 xxxLeanniexxx
Brilliant. I just caught up with the first three stories and as such am probably going to fail all of my exams
4/30/2016 c6 Guest
I like how Moody's Boggart is a whistling Sneakoscope. Or is that 'Moody'?

For real-Moody, it could be that he fears unknown dangers... But I think it's more likely that this is already fake-Moody and he fears being found out.

Much, much more interesting than Lupin's Boggart...
4/28/2016 c6 Dixie.f.9
Good one Hermonie.
4/24/2016 c6 Guest
Fantastic chapter! Can't wait to hear Draco's reaction to Hermione punching his brother.
4/23/2016 c6 sparksx4
This story is amazing! I love it so much! Honestly, when I first looked at the word count for 'Innocent' I thought it was going to be one of those stories that dragged on, but I was pleasantly surprised! Throughout the series, you've managed to keep the attention of the readers very well.

The POV change is very good, it's easy to tell who POV it is, unless the story requires it to be unknown. You're mysteries are so creative and left me second-guessing everyone. Also, just the general kids messing around is great, it's so cute. I am curious to see as the story progresses, who the kids will end up dating, personally, I've found myself leaning towards Draco and Hermione (idk, but when Hermione was petrified Draco was by her bed and it was so cute. Also, it would be such rebellion towards Lucius)

Overall this is a really good series and I'm excited to read more. Your writing is so good, keep it up :)

P.S sorry for the long review, I didn't write one this whole series (I've been reading it over the holidays) so I felt that a long one was necessary :)
4/22/2016 c6 2AnonymouslyKnown
finally finished the rest of this series. and im loving it. so glad after all this time youre still writing! can't wait for more . thank you!
4/19/2016 c6 38almostinsane
This was perfect. I enjoyed the dueling scene a lot.
4/18/2016 c6 mysticalphoenix-avalon
Thank YOU! Oh. I love this piece! You managed to write the duelling part beautifully!
4/16/2016 c6 Blinded in a bolthole
The Original Boy Who Lived is even a bigger prick than the canon-Draco.
4/16/2016 c5 Blinded in a bolthole
Harry's very first stalker, eh? She made her move early.
4/16/2016 c6 quin3218
Loved the dueling scene!
4/16/2016 c6 lollapalooza-18
So happy to see an update!
And I like how you're mixing both PoA and GoF into the same story.
Those boggarts were pretty interesting, what with Draco's biggest fear being growing up to be like his father and Neville's.. Well, to be honest, I was wondering if what he 'saw' was a memory of his mother being tortured?
I love the fact that you're including so much of Neville's past and his experiences into the story.
Kudos!
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
4/16/2016 c6 3Nik1627
Amazing! It's always astonishing to see Hermione in a fight with Malfoy especially a punch!
4/16/2016 c6 Lyra121
I love this chapter, especially because I don't think Neville's bogart is a banshee, since it didn't take on a shape, maybe it's something he heard but didn't see as a baby. Something like his parents screams. Maybe Moody knew that and that's why he got so many points.
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