
3/8/2019 c11 Abimay
That's the best thing I have ever read Evan better than rainbow rowell when's u next story coming out
That's the best thing I have ever read Evan better than rainbow rowell when's u next story coming out
5/17/2017 c11
2Misia0123
Although awfully cringe in some parts. This story is a decent read. I'll be willing to read any future chapter you have planned for this. Maybe try to pick it up with a more solid story line? Like what happened with orehimes hollow.. or how come zangetsu is back in control? Could you explain that a little too. Coz it was a little hectic and I didn't fully understand who the 'prisoners' were and what the hell she was doing in a sex dungeon in the first place. And did ichigo come to some sort of agreement with zangetsu or what...
Otherwise keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next update!

Although awfully cringe in some parts. This story is a decent read. I'll be willing to read any future chapter you have planned for this. Maybe try to pick it up with a more solid story line? Like what happened with orehimes hollow.. or how come zangetsu is back in control? Could you explain that a little too. Coz it was a little hectic and I didn't fully understand who the 'prisoners' were and what the hell she was doing in a sex dungeon in the first place. And did ichigo come to some sort of agreement with zangetsu or what...
Otherwise keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next update!
3/10/2017 c11 Revanchist21
This chapter was interesting and I really hope to see more chapters soon. Keep up the good work man!
This chapter was interesting and I really hope to see more chapters soon. Keep up the good work man!
2/12/2017 c10 Guest
this was funny
this was funny
2/11/2017 c10 Guest
What The Fuck I am Lost
What The Fuck I am Lost
1/10/2017 c9
4Kittydj
Good story! I like all of the drama and problems that they have. Well, not like that but you know what I mean. It's good for the plot.
Please keep updating!

Good story! I like all of the drama and problems that they have. Well, not like that but you know what I mean. It's good for the plot.
Please keep updating!
1/4/2017 c8 ghostmarine51
This would be even more funny if both orihime and the baby died brutally and ichigo and hollow were the cause of it and ichigo hangs himself killing both him and the hollow because he's all three races his soul implodes when he dies so no hueco mundo or soul society for him you should get rid of this its cheezy and a stupid concept and when you made ichigo have that "Nightmare" just showed one of your sick fanticies you pedophile
This would be even more funny if both orihime and the baby died brutally and ichigo and hollow were the cause of it and ichigo hangs himself killing both him and the hollow because he's all three races his soul implodes when he dies so no hueco mundo or soul society for him you should get rid of this its cheezy and a stupid concept and when you made ichigo have that "Nightmare" just showed one of your sick fanticies you pedophile
11/6/2016 c1 Guest
Lol this is funny
Lol this is funny
11/5/2016 c8 Rush Limbaugh
You should have Ichigo and Orihime hollow meet up.
You should have Ichigo and Orihime hollow meet up.