for Heroes5/27/2016 c1 patric
continue, you have caught my interest.
continue, you have caught my interest.
1/19/2016 c1 
18Rex Blackwood
Hm keep it up :) was gonna write a story similar to this but been moving but I'll be following this one
18Rex BlackwoodHm keep it up :) was gonna write a story similar to this but been moving but I'll be following this one
1/16/2016 c1 32Rosalind2013
It's an interesting idea!
It's my personal experience that coming up with a plot as you go doesn't work all that well, so unless you already have a plan for the course of your story, you should leave it as a one-shot until you do!
Though I realize it's likely that you do fully intend to finish this story, and were just trying to prompt people to review.
Best wishes,
~Rose
32Rosalind2013It's an interesting idea!
It's my personal experience that coming up with a plot as you go doesn't work all that well, so unless you already have a plan for the course of your story, you should leave it as a one-shot until you do!
Though I realize it's likely that you do fully intend to finish this story, and were just trying to prompt people to review.
Best wishes,
~Rose
1/15/2016 c1 145Invader Johnny
Well I can only hope that Clockwork does not give Danny any more despair because let's face it an emotional Danny is never a good thing.
... So yes... Continue, I'm intrigued.
Invader Johnny Signing Off
145Invader JohnnyWell I can only hope that Clockwork does not give Danny any more despair because let's face it an emotional Danny is never a good thing.
... So yes... Continue, I'm intrigued.
Invader Johnny Signing Off