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1/20/2016 c1 Elquenodebesernombrado
with Harry in the new world you need money resource and knowledge of magic books and is very helpful Muggles could lead a lot of house-elves to help start depending where seven kingdoms, Esso or elsewhere
1/20/2016 c1 MasterOfDragonsGod
Interesting
1/20/2016 c1 HeyStardust
Well. This story is basically a blank canvas. Before you know my views. You know that my English is not too good. I'll tell you that the issue of prophecy is something stupid. I think you should take it from another perspective. Many writers love to write the heroic harry with a mission. And miemtras even I must admit that is interesting. If you want to write something original. Then change it. Harry turns into someone else. So you see the soul of Voldemort frasmento corrupted him. Ambicioson giving some power. But still retain their sense of right and wrong. So you see the entrance to the world of Game of Thrones is an accident. So you see reincarnate. targaryen a prince. So you see in Viserys. I personally like the couple harry / Daenerys. Even if it's incest. Because if you plan to write game of thrones. You should be able to write incest. Even if you do not like. Harry stories born in stark family. Baratheon. They are repeated. There are very few with the Tyrrell family. Martel. Lannister. Arryn. So you see harry birth of a Tyrrel. and a princess targaryen. And there you have your relationship with Daenerys. You have a lot of options. Think wisely. So you see Oberyn son. and a princess targaryen. Something is missing. That together. Harry and Daenerys fight for the throne. It is ambitious. Sarcastic. Interesting. And something that you should look. Harry's name. It is too common. Change it. A name that refers to harry. Maybe. Harkyn targaryen. I dont know. I wish you luck. I'll be looking forward to your story. By the way. Personally I have nothing against a powerful and dominant harry. Only if harry is discreet about it. Because if Harry turns to dominate all his enemies easily. Then you get bored. It need not be weak. Only subtle and take time
1/17/2016 c1 Guest
You need to capitalize your proper nouns. It really takes a lot away from a story when things like that get overlooked.
1/18/2016 c1 11chm01
well, this is a good start, I look board to the next chapter.
1/18/2016 c1 iitrnr
The idea is very interesting. Will be looking forward to more. One thing though, I suggest getting a beta. Most names are not capitalised. A fair number of sentences are oddly structured. There are a fair number of typos and random mistakes as well. If you take care of these things the story will read much better. Hope to see the next chapter soon. Thanks.
1/17/2016 c1 borgen1337
Looking forward reading the story!
1/17/2016 c1 5Light Lord Cybergate
Wish there were a story where Harry AND his friends started their own house in Westeros with magic and -if possible - with their own dragons/magical creatures...(With harry has the Lord of course)
Maybe even bring a basilisk along as well... :-)

Anyway...this is looking good so far.
Looking forward to the continuation.
1/17/2016 c1 thunder18
Great chapter Update soon
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