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6/25/2016 c5 3monkey kix ass
interesting interactions b/w harry and the others in westeros. enjoyed reading what you've written so far. hope you get around to updating again soon.
6/21/2016 c3 Guest
I had to stop reading as soon as you called him Hadrian.
6/4/2016 c2 Weird
This chapter felt weird, a sort of powerup with much plot involvement. The goblin scene also felt crap, like you didnt give them a reason to do anything and felt bashing without giving the goblins some invented background.
6/4/2016 c1 Wording
Your prophecy wording absolutely sucks. There is no nice way to say it, it sucks.
6/6/2016 c5 5ThedemonlordPingu
Please update soon
This fic is pretty good and I would hate to see it shelved
5/26/2016 c5 Guest
we want more
5/19/2016 c3 Fainfan
The stark was abit out of character. But than again being saved from death's door does that for people
5/19/2016 c2 Fainfan
Ouch. Death dying to the death curse Hahahaha.
5/21/2016 c3 shadowquark
Why Change his name makes no sense
5/19/2016 c5 Fainfan
Loving this story so far
5/14/2016 c5 chronodaimon
Great fic. Lots of potential. Hope to see more soon, how often do you update
5/9/2016 c5 22Slytherin Studios
I like it, please update soon.
5/1/2016 c5 7crazyrajat
You write in first person. Don't do that it just doest work for this type of story. It just is plain as weird. The story itself is not bad. I suggest you convert your story to a third person.
4/26/2016 c5 Guest
we want more
4/27/2016 c5 sortofbored
Interesting. Keep it up.
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