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4/7/2016 c5 pratikkumar
please don't abandon this story. I like the idea behind this. update more frequently.
4/7/2016 c5 4saashi samy
Interesting idea

I like
4/7/2016 c5 ahsanrox
The story seems to be going good so far.
Keep up the great writing.
4/7/2016 c5 desdelor97
This was a great chapter.
Please keep up the great work.
4/7/2016 c5 thunder18
Great chapter Update soon
4/7/2016 c5 2Charles Ceaser
Please update soon. This is awesome. Can't wait for the real action to start.
4/7/2016 c5 Blacksword Zero
Great chapter!
4/7/2016 c5 BioHazard82
Another good chapter.
4/7/2016 c5 alec-potter
Nice chapter.
3/27/2016 c4 Pokemark17
Next chapter?
3/19/2016 c4 Mark Adaar
Yeah. the name Harry sounds good for our world but it's too weak for Westros.
3/19/2016 c4 BrokenReforged
This is a great story, but I find quite a few spelling mistakes, I was wondering if you had a beta. If not then I would be happy to be one. Also just copy and paste your story into Word, the spell check on it is fantastic.

Hope you continue writing,
Zasq555
3/14/2016 c4 Scorpion Sorcerer
Pretty good story, hope u can improve on structure of ur writing, personally i prefer third person writing but hope u add some more detail. Good story none thr less, hope u update soon!
3/11/2016 c4 Guest
this story has a lot of potential. pretty excited to see where this goes.
3/11/2016 c4 AnimeA55Kicker
(-.-') ...don't ya think its a bit of an overestimation of Harry's sword play level (which should be none) to say that he is better than Jamie Lannister? I mean cannon Harry has had no formal sword training (unless he somehow got that at Hogwarts, because you could quite easily have a flashback to do that), and fast reflexes does not equal sword skills. And the sword of gyr wouldn't be a greatsword I don't believe; if it was worn at Harry's side then it would be a bastard sword or a long sword.
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