for Namikaze Naruto: Son of the Kiiroi Senkō3/16 c8 Guest
Nooo way. No update since 2016? Its a shame it looks like this fanfic was abandoned
Nooo way. No update since 2016? Its a shame it looks like this fanfic was abandoned
12/30/2020 c8 
2GarfieldJL
I wouldn't say Naruto is too strong or OP, he is very quick and against peers his age he would be substantially stronger than them as a result. Most of his victories seem to be from the fact he doesn't try to goof off at the start of a fight he just gets underestimated and he capitalizes on it.
2GarfieldJLI wouldn't say Naruto is too strong or OP, he is very quick and against peers his age he would be substantially stronger than them as a result. Most of his victories seem to be from the fact he doesn't try to goof off at the start of a fight he just gets underestimated and he capitalizes on it.
6/14/2019 c6 1Omnireceptacle
So, I haven't left a review yet, as I wanted to review when I had caught up, but for real, I just had to leave this review now.
First of all, love this fic. Finally a fic where Kakashi was done right.
Second of all, after reading this, I plan on changing my own writing style. Writing in first person gets really hard after a while..
Keep up the good story!
1OmnireceptacleSo, I haven't left a review yet, as I wanted to review when I had caught up, but for real, I just had to leave this review now.
First of all, love this fic. Finally a fic where Kakashi was done right.
Second of all, after reading this, I plan on changing my own writing style. Writing in first person gets really hard after a while..
Keep up the good story!
2/15/2017 c6 Guest
Where is your proof that Hinata was weaker than Sakura?
The story was going well until this chapter. Naruto spamming shadow clones to study is stupid, and if you don't understand why that is, I'm not going to bother to explain.
Naruto having two summons is again idiotic.
Your knowledge of psychology is atrocious. Actually psychology itself is a flawed subject. And in all honesty, a four year old would not be traumatised that bad by a single incident, mostly because kids tend to forget isolated incidents like that. I could go on for hours on this topic, but you are incredibly stupid and I highly doubt you could comprehend anything. So, I'll keep it short and simple, a child is more prone to forget bad things happening to them and replace them with good memories than an adult, because they're mind is still growing and is naturally adapted to protect a child's mental stability. If Naruto had been kidnapped and tortured repeatedly for days, he might have remembered that time, but there's high chance that he would even forget that and that incident would have been buried in his sub-conscious, if he is saved and years pass after that where more happier memories replace it.
Where is your proof that Hinata was weaker than Sakura?
The story was going well until this chapter. Naruto spamming shadow clones to study is stupid, and if you don't understand why that is, I'm not going to bother to explain.
Naruto having two summons is again idiotic.
Your knowledge of psychology is atrocious. Actually psychology itself is a flawed subject. And in all honesty, a four year old would not be traumatised that bad by a single incident, mostly because kids tend to forget isolated incidents like that. I could go on for hours on this topic, but you are incredibly stupid and I highly doubt you could comprehend anything. So, I'll keep it short and simple, a child is more prone to forget bad things happening to them and replace them with good memories than an adult, because they're mind is still growing and is naturally adapted to protect a child's mental stability. If Naruto had been kidnapped and tortured repeatedly for days, he might have remembered that time, but there's high chance that he would even forget that and that incident would have been buried in his sub-conscious, if he is saved and years pass after that where more happier memories replace it.
10/10/2016 c8 Guest
Man, this is good. Need a new chapter asap!
Man, this is good. Need a new chapter asap!
7/22/2016 c2 680 Jordinio 0
I tried to read this, but the constant switching between past and present-tense was too much for me.
680 Jordinio 0I tried to read this, but the constant switching between past and present-tense was too much for me.
5/8/2016 c8 Guest
How does Naruto get bad luck here?
He's practically super lucky in Canon!
How does Naruto get bad luck here?
He's practically super lucky in Canon!
5/8/2016 c7 8animecutylover
Gai is right, where the heck did he learn it from anyways?
I'm glad though that they got to attend the Chunin Exams.
8animecutyloverGai is right, where the heck did he learn it from anyways?
I'm glad though that they got to attend the Chunin Exams.
5/8/2016 c6 animecutylover
Omg!
Naruto is kind of like canon Sasuke here!
Seriously, that could lead to trouble.
Omg!
Naruto is kind of like canon Sasuke here!
Seriously, that could lead to trouble.