
9/18 c21 Dudley.D.Dudley
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY.
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY.
6/30 c21
3PuffsOfPygmys
I’m not usually a fan of a female Harry, but I do love your story and I truly hope this on in particular is updated at some point!

I’m not usually a fan of a female Harry, but I do love your story and I truly hope this on in particular is updated at some point!
6/16 c18 dodger101
The scene in the bar where you wrote about ninjas' sexual was idk how to say it but its weird, especially knowing that Harry is open and regretful she has never done an orgy.
The scene in the bar where you wrote about ninjas' sexual was idk how to say it but its weird, especially knowing that Harry is open and regretful she has never done an orgy.
5/21 c21 Trixia Oliver
A relação entre Harry e o Kakashi se desenvolve de forma tão bonita. Acho que é o casal escrito mais completo e romântico que já li. Nada as pressas, cobrindo todas as bases de um relacionamento. E, levando em conta o passado dos dois, faz todo o sentido. A história é realmente maravilhosa!
A relação entre Harry e o Kakashi se desenvolve de forma tão bonita. Acho que é o casal escrito mais completo e romântico que já li. Nada as pressas, cobrindo todas as bases de um relacionamento. E, levando em conta o passado dos dois, faz todo o sentido. A história é realmente maravilhosa!
4/5 c21 Guest
I love to re-read your ff and dream about reading its continuation. It’s highly humorous. Slowly building attraction between Hari and Kakashi is adorable and well-paced. I admire that Hari, despite being a MoD, is not portrayed as an overpowered character or being on par with the shinobi in terms of speed and prowess - some flaws are needed to avoid a Mary Sue role.
I love to re-read your ff and dream about reading its continuation. It’s highly humorous. Slowly building attraction between Hari and Kakashi is adorable and well-paced. I admire that Hari, despite being a MoD, is not portrayed as an overpowered character or being on par with the shinobi in terms of speed and prowess - some flaws are needed to avoid a Mary Sue role.
12/8/2022 c1 MeMeMooMoo
And just like Tsume Yuki you were too stupid to finish your story. That's what happens when you write slash. When you're too stupid to keep to the original orientation of your characters, you're too stupid to do anything. Good riddance. Idiot,
And just like Tsume Yuki you were too stupid to finish your story. That's what happens when you write slash. When you're too stupid to keep to the original orientation of your characters, you're too stupid to do anything. Good riddance. Idiot,
10/29/2022 c18 Kent Morgan
Water makes the burning worse. They should drink milk. On an unrelated note, only one third of the world's population can process milk; it's a mutation.
Water makes the burning worse. They should drink milk. On an unrelated note, only one third of the world's population can process milk; it's a mutation.
10/26/2022 c21
26917brat
I really like this story it is amazingly well written and has my attention hooked and my curiosity about what is going to happen next rising with the more I read of it. Brilliant work.

I really like this story it is amazingly well written and has my attention hooked and my curiosity about what is going to happen next rising with the more I read of it. Brilliant work.
9/23/2022 c21 AidenJacksonSmithDSBB
God I love this book, quick question do you have reader's block or is it on hiatus?
God I love this book, quick question do you have reader's block or is it on hiatus?