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6/20/2017 c1 Guest
come on, man continue this story
6/12/2017 c1 Guest
when you continue this story?poz continue
10/16/2016 c1 Anonymous Noob the 2nd
This is quite good! I hope you do not abandon it. Looking forward to more.
3/19/2016 c1 darth cake
i like where this is going.
will there be more?
2/22/2016 c1 2TheTenggi
I love it so far! Keep it up! ;D
1/20/2016 c1 14The Antic Repartee
I think it's really great that my AU inspired you to write something! (I would say inspired more than 'based' since you changed so much). You definitely took an interesting turn on some of the things, but it's fun seeing some direct quotes in there and where you chose to put them. It's also cool to see a new take on Astrid's rationalizing.

I am puzzled by some aspects-namely it "weird" for there to be girl stormtroopers. Or why Hiccup is suddenly related to Dagur and Heather. The way this read, I think it could turn into a really nice Heatstrid story too! XD
1/18/2016 c1 1The Anvil of Writing
Good start, might want to re-read and check for spelling and grammar errors.

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