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1SirCalamarus956
Just ended reading this fic and I have to say I am disappointed, it was an idea with potential, but I feel like it got lost by focusing too much on criticizing the Gravity Falls characters. Plus, Harley is so annoying in this story, she was written in a way that made her a Mary Sue, one of the worst kind of characters in my opinion.
1SirCalamarus956Just ended reading this fic and I have to say I am disappointed, it was an idea with potential, but I feel like it got lost by focusing too much on criticizing the Gravity Falls characters. Plus, Harley is so annoying in this story, she was written in a way that made her a Mary Sue, one of the worst kind of characters in my opinion.
9/9/2023 c30 NoXVZhuusox
This was a entertaining read. Though, it seems Hailey here seems Mary Sueish and it looks like you like bashing Gravity Falls?
This was a entertaining read. Though, it seems Hailey here seems Mary Sueish and it looks like you like bashing Gravity Falls?
1/16/2021 c30 zlap
I did not read the story all the way through. I dropped a while ago around the shape-shifter chapter but I came to see how it ended after an itch for GF crossover fics, and I don't like how the story is, assumingly, written. The Gravity Falls characters were just de-powered, they were in the wrong, and Hailey was in the right. GF characters were just harming and harassing the magical community and I don't like Hailey as written. Also, Ford making weapons for the Huntsclan he would've been forced to join them or else, not left alone.
I did not read the story all the way through. I dropped a while ago around the shape-shifter chapter but I came to see how it ended after an itch for GF crossover fics, and I don't like how the story is, assumingly, written. The Gravity Falls characters were just de-powered, they were in the wrong, and Hailey was in the right. GF characters were just harming and harassing the magical community and I don't like Hailey as written. Also, Ford making weapons for the Huntsclan he would've been forced to join them or else, not left alone.
5/23/2020 c30 Radical Scum
Not gonna lie I wasn’t a fan of Dipper&Mabel getting their powers back, Still enjoy the story.
Not gonna lie I wasn’t a fan of Dipper&Mabel getting their powers back, Still enjoy the story.
5/9/2018 c30 nightmaster000
Really awesome ending to a really awesome story. :)
Though i'm curious since this story is now taking place on a different timeline to Back to Gravity Falls. Does this mean Bill could make a comeback sooner or in a different way?
Really awesome ending to a really awesome story. :)
Though i'm curious since this story is now taking place on a different timeline to Back to Gravity Falls. Does this mean Bill could make a comeback sooner or in a different way?
4/24/2018 c30 8The Keeper of Worlds
Ok, glad Bill got knocked, but damn if Haley didnt still piss me off in the end. She had no mercy or actually try to look into how the creatures forced some of them to interact half the time. Plus, Jake risked it all to save Rose, friends, and family many times, she complains on them she's also insulting the hell out of her own brother. Hoping something gets that rod out her butt, even by force if needed. Overall, loved it and interested to see more stories.
8The Keeper of WorldsOk, glad Bill got knocked, but damn if Haley didnt still piss me off in the end. She had no mercy or actually try to look into how the creatures forced some of them to interact half the time. Plus, Jake risked it all to save Rose, friends, and family many times, she complains on them she's also insulting the hell out of her own brother. Hoping something gets that rod out her butt, even by force if needed. Overall, loved it and interested to see more stories.
4/21/2018 c29 1retrogunner7
Kinda feels like your bashing the Gravity crew a little too much, especially with Haley feels towards them.
1retrogunner7Kinda feels like your bashing the Gravity crew a little too much, especially with Haley feels towards them.
4/21/2018 c29 Ghost Man
Sounds like some Dark Souls level of bull...
I still hate how...racist dragons are . Such uppity beings.
Sounds like some Dark Souls level of bull...
I still hate how...racist dragons are . Such uppity beings.
4/7/2018 c28 2a very angry ravage
Pacifica learning Haley is a dragon, does this mean Back to Gravity Falls will be retcon? i sure hope so...
2a very angry ravagePacifica learning Haley is a dragon, does this mean Back to Gravity Falls will be retcon? i sure hope so...