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11/13/2016 c1 13keiman and kei
Excellent, fairy! I lost myself in the Elevator of Doom. The symmetry, the words, the terror, the excitement, the sheer horror- all of these things reminded me of the true horror Master of Terror- Edgar Allan Poe! I found myself drawn to recall his famed Pit & Pendulum tale. The elevator itself reminded me of an Alfred Hitchcock story by Robert Bloch, another true horror master. Clearly this elevator is the narrator's own private Hell and he or she will be here for all of eternity. Why? What has 'Annette' done to deserve this Fate? A one-shot? No fairy, this could be built on for at elast several more chapters. A wonderful piece of writing indeed.
7/10/2016 c1 littleflor1
Wow... you scared the hell out of me...
So I suppose your writing was amazing...
3/10/2016 c1 InCommand30836
Amazing writing but what the hell just happened?

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