2/18/2022 c60 9fanclaire
I loved every chapter of this story.
Although I think Toby and Carl got away with it for their disobedience many times. To me, a spanking isn't abuse like Toby's dad used to do.
I think Daryl is coming to save them. In a few weeks, he's already become Toby's father, more than his real father all his life. He doesn't have the title yet, that's all.
I would also like her to jump into his arms and say "daddy" to him. Forever, even after.
I don't understand why she is trying to see her real father.
Merle should kill him. He will put them all in danger to save his own skin. Even his own daughter. He will run and report them to the governor.
Daryl will happily kill the man. Maybe Toby will have the strength to do it, if he betrays them.
I will eagerly await the next chapter.
Happy Valentine's Day to you too.
I loved every chapter of this story.
Although I think Toby and Carl got away with it for their disobedience many times. To me, a spanking isn't abuse like Toby's dad used to do.
I think Daryl is coming to save them. In a few weeks, he's already become Toby's father, more than his real father all his life. He doesn't have the title yet, that's all.
I would also like her to jump into his arms and say "daddy" to him. Forever, even after.
I don't understand why she is trying to see her real father.
Merle should kill him. He will put them all in danger to save his own skin. Even his own daughter. He will run and report them to the governor.
Daryl will happily kill the man. Maybe Toby will have the strength to do it, if he betrays them.
I will eagerly await the next chapter.
Happy Valentine's Day to you too.
2/16/2022 c60 1Atilia Dawn Black
my guess is Daryl and gang show up to rescue them, Daryl gets captured again and is going to be thoroughly confused when Toby starts hugging him and calling him Daddy while trying to convince the Gov not to kill him and Merle. and I hope Toby's dad sneaks out and joins Toby's bunch, cause it is about time for him to receive a beat down by everyone in her group that has ever seen her flinch and expect to be beaten(which is everyone). and I kinda also sorta want Toby to be the one who kills him, showing her that he has no power over her anymore, but that would prolly cause more damage than help, so... but I can't wait to read what really happens! I'll have to go check on Bobbie15Jo's story again while I wait for another chapter.
my guess is Daryl and gang show up to rescue them, Daryl gets captured again and is going to be thoroughly confused when Toby starts hugging him and calling him Daddy while trying to convince the Gov not to kill him and Merle. and I hope Toby's dad sneaks out and joins Toby's bunch, cause it is about time for him to receive a beat down by everyone in her group that has ever seen her flinch and expect to be beaten(which is everyone). and I kinda also sorta want Toby to be the one who kills him, showing her that he has no power over her anymore, but that would prolly cause more damage than help, so... but I can't wait to read what really happens! I'll have to go check on Bobbie15Jo's story again while I wait for another chapter.
2/15/2022 c60 battlebugsspeedrunner
holy shit i had forgotten that shane died
uhhhhhh
im sure its fine
Great chapter as always!
holy shit i had forgotten that shane died
uhhhhhh
im sure its fine
Great chapter as always!
2/15/2022 c60 Zsacian
What do i want to happen next?
hmm
Negan to arrive early!
love negan
this whole story is just a massive long intro to negan, its still in the prologue
What do i want to happen next?
hmm
Negan to arrive early!
love negan
this whole story is just a massive long intro to negan, its still in the prologue
2/15/2022 c60 mediarecordable
Great chapter!
i loved the other stories you reccomended as well, although it was hard to find the one by brodunski
"Oh yeah... that... i lied" was just ahhh.
Beautiful
Great chapter!
i loved the other stories you reccomended as well, although it was hard to find the one by brodunski
"Oh yeah... that... i lied" was just ahhh.
Beautiful
2/14/2022 c60 COULDNT12761022
I much prefer the Merle/toby dynamic compared to the Daryl/toby dynamic
I much prefer the Merle/toby dynamic compared to the Daryl/toby dynamic
2/14/2022 c60 blooe
loved this chapter! seeing toby try to act whiny and like a child was really funny; i love her character so much. i'm excited to see the next chapter-looks like things are heating up!
loved this chapter! seeing toby try to act whiny and like a child was really funny; i love her character so much. i'm excited to see the next chapter-looks like things are heating up!