for Deleted Scenes From That Part Always Worked & It Still Works
13/7/2016 c4 jordana60
I'm reviewing both the regular chapter and this chapter together.I'm glad Lorelai and Luke are having a boy, but I hope they name him something other than William! Jess and Rrory re so in love, it almost makes me feel like I'm intruding on a private moment. But the sex is so hot ..thanks for making an M Rted version!
I'm reviewing both the regular chapter and this chapter together.I'm glad Lorelai and Luke are having a boy, but I hope they name him something other than William! Jess and Rrory re so in love, it almost makes me feel like I'm intruding on a private moment. But the sex is so hot ..thanks for making an M Rted version!
2/2/2016 c2 jordana60
You are getting even better with the "deleted scenes".That was hot.I hope you plan on more chapters like that!
You are getting even better with the "deleted scenes".That was hot.I hope you plan on more chapters like that!
1/19/2016 c1 jordana60
I am loving this story, and watching their relationship take hold. This is how it should have gone in the fact, this is how it should have gone in real life! I prefer the adult version of this chapter, and hope to see more!
I am loving this story, and watching their relationship take hold. This is how it should have gone in the fact, this is how it should have gone in real life! I prefer the adult version of this chapter, and hope to see more!