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16Wise Lion 17
Damn. I wonder what the ladies will think. I hope they still believe he is innocent. Please update.
16Wise Lion 17Damn. I wonder what the ladies will think. I hope they still believe he is innocent. Please update.
2/1 c19 CuriousReader21
Can't ge just shoit some video proof of Oak attacking helpless Delia with his Dragonite...
He is a professor not officer jenny so he can't do such brazen attacking in daylight to anyone?! Even when Delia herself is not criminal in world's eyes...
These betrayed fanfics just have soo much of idiotic loopholes that it sometimes gives me headache WELL WHATEVER...
Can't ge just shoit some video proof of Oak attacking helpless Delia with his Dragonite...
He is a professor not officer jenny so he can't do such brazen attacking in daylight to anyone?! Even when Delia herself is not criminal in world's eyes...
These betrayed fanfics just have soo much of idiotic loopholes that it sometimes gives me headache WELL WHATEVER...
2/1 c11 CuriousReader21
Well he could go search for some Legendaries he saved during his travels!
Like latias for example or Mewtwo?!
Well he could go search for some Legendaries he saved during his travels!
Like latias for example or Mewtwo?!
2/1 c8 CuriousReader21
Professor Oak then took charge. "Alright. Gary, you take Johto. Brock, search Kanto. Cilan, I'll leave Unova to you. Drew, you search Hoenn. Paul, I'd like you to check the Orange Islands. Barry, I'm leaving Sinnoh to you. Finally, Trip, I'd like you to search Kalos for him. Tracey and I will spread the word, and I'd like you, Kenny, to gather information if you can."
The trainers all accepted the Professor's plan. Delia had organized Ash's supporters into a similar plan. Max and Bonnie had Kanto, since they were young, Misty had the Orange Islands, Clemont was going to Johto, May would take Hoenn, Dawn would search Sinnoh, Iris had Unova, and Serena was searching Kalos, with them all keeping contact.
Both groups were equally determined to find the missing Pallet native, but for opposite reasons. The race to find Ash Ketchum had begun.
SERIOUSLY UNIQUE IDEA THERE!
BUT DID THE GIRLS GAVE TO SEE HIM FIGHT ALONE JUST TO HELP HIM AFTERWARDS (WHEN WAS RUNNING?!)
Professor Oak then took charge. "Alright. Gary, you take Johto. Brock, search Kanto. Cilan, I'll leave Unova to you. Drew, you search Hoenn. Paul, I'd like you to check the Orange Islands. Barry, I'm leaving Sinnoh to you. Finally, Trip, I'd like you to search Kalos for him. Tracey and I will spread the word, and I'd like you, Kenny, to gather information if you can."
The trainers all accepted the Professor's plan. Delia had organized Ash's supporters into a similar plan. Max and Bonnie had Kanto, since they were young, Misty had the Orange Islands, Clemont was going to Johto, May would take Hoenn, Dawn would search Sinnoh, Iris had Unova, and Serena was searching Kalos, with them all keeping contact.
Both groups were equally determined to find the missing Pallet native, but for opposite reasons. The race to find Ash Ketchum had begun.
SERIOUSLY UNIQUE IDEA THERE!
BUT DID THE GIRLS GAVE TO SEE HIM FIGHT ALONE JUST TO HELP HIM AFTERWARDS (WHEN WAS RUNNING?!)
12/12/2020 c11 gachamidnightgum
is this still the kalos reagion?if so than ash forgot the fact that squashy is here in kalos lol
is this still the kalos reagion?if so than ash forgot the fact that squashy is here in kalos lol
9/12/2019 c20 Wheatley9001
I'm getting real friggin tired of writers that say they'll post a chapter and then don't.
I'm getting real friggin tired of writers that say they'll post a chapter and then don't.
5/7/2019 c20 Guest
Where's Chapter 21 don't hold out on us.
Where's Chapter 21 don't hold out on us.
9/28/2018 c20 Guest
When are you going to put the next chapter up
When are you going to put the next chapter up
7/28/2018 c20 Shitty dead book
good thing its dead, cuz its garbo
good thing its dead, cuz its garbo
1/29/2018 c20 zsnowboard32
I like the story, but I there can be some improvements. 1st of all, I think that you could’ve explained how the traitors learned about the false news. And also, How long after the Kalos League did Ash get betrayed? I rate this story an 8 out of 10. Good Job! And we need 21!
I like the story, but I there can be some improvements. 1st of all, I think that you could’ve explained how the traitors learned about the false news. And also, How long after the Kalos League did Ash get betrayed? I rate this story an 8 out of 10. Good Job! And we need 21!