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1/24/2016 c2 Guest
A good chapter/update
1/24/2016 c1 51Sharper the Writer
So far, such a very sad beginning for KP... :(
1/24/2016 c2 Bookfisher
This is looking interesting. Shakespear plays eh? Always felt Kim could make a decent Hamlet, but its not necessary where we are going.

Shego really should have been more open to getting Jon a dog , even if its stupid with a naked molerat already in the house, being mean to the boy with potential Mystic Monkey Powers, and who is the son of one of the few people capable of scaring Shego, is not a good strategy
1/21/2016 c1 Guest
Good first chapter
1/21/2016 c1 3KPRS Splicer
Interesting intro. With a nice little twist at the end. I actually thought the husband was going to be Josh. Not to give the twist away, but I hope her partner doesn't treat her too badly.

KPRS Splicer
1/21/2016 c1 1GalaxyWarrior 96
This is a good start and when I read it I though she was married to Ron because of how you explained in the story. You can add a way to bring back ron like something about Magic like his monkey power. But really good start.
1/21/2016 c1 4CajunBear73
Interesting...

And that she had to move on like this, too.

CB73

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