for The Games Best Played4/9/2016 c3 Malcolm Cain
I have enjoyed 2 of your stories thus far and enjoyed them both. you don't make things to complicated with the gamer system nor do you try to reinvent the wheel by adding stuff that makes no sense. your writing style is also pleasant and makes it easy to get lost in the story. it is my hope that you continue both this and your warhammer story.
I have enjoyed 2 of your stories thus far and enjoyed them both. you don't make things to complicated with the gamer system nor do you try to reinvent the wheel by adding stuff that makes no sense. your writing style is also pleasant and makes it easy to get lost in the story. it is my hope that you continue both this and your warhammer story.
3/16/2016 c3 Guest
It's getting political up in here now son. These talks with the hokage have always been my least favorite parts of naruto fanfiction, but you made it enjoyable. Good on ya mate
It's getting political up in here now son. These talks with the hokage have always been my least favorite parts of naruto fanfiction, but you made it enjoyable. Good on ya mate
3/16/2016 c2 Guest
Most people don't like sappy scenes like that, but I do. Keep up the good work
Most people don't like sappy scenes like that, but I do. Keep up the good work
3/16/2016 c1 Guest
This looks like a good gamer story. I like how you mad your own spin on how the power could be in the narutoverse instead of just importing Gaia and the Abyss. Very nice and well written
This looks like a good gamer story. I like how you mad your own spin on how the power could be in the narutoverse instead of just importing Gaia and the Abyss. Very nice and well written
13/17/2016 c3 SILVERMOON5449
Great chapter I have always liked oc characters with the gamer power, it gives a new perspective on the story. I look forward to more chapters.
Great chapter I have always liked oc characters with the gamer power, it gives a new perspective on the story. I look forward to more chapters.
3/11/2016 c2 Easter Man
Yey... I like this!
Keep going, I really like The Gamer manhwa and Naruto Fics...
Good luck!
Yey... I like this!
Keep going, I really like The Gamer manhwa and Naruto Fics...
Good luck!
2/6/2016 c1 Daxsis
this has potential. Cant wait to see where u take it as its hard to find a half decent Gamer story, tho i do hope u wont add the moronic skills ID Create and ID Escape they are just stupid and there are many better ways to add dungeons. plz update soon Ja Ne
this has potential. Cant wait to see where u take it as its hard to find a half decent Gamer story, tho i do hope u wont add the moronic skills ID Create and ID Escape they are just stupid and there are many better ways to add dungeons. plz update soon Ja Ne
1/26/2016 c1 MysticSpider
Me want spoiler
You spoiler me give?
Just wanted to ask what was his kekkei genkai :P
Me want spoiler
You spoiler me give?
Just wanted to ask what was his kekkei genkai :P