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9/24/2019 c2 3Acolyte of the Blood Moon
Glad you adopted this story, hope you can fix it. While tye premise is interesting, the story is more full of holes than a piece of Swiss cheese. Sudden changes in facts or status that were not even hinted at and then retconned, wild swings in attitude, personality or disposition... İ really hope you will fix it.
9/24/2019 c2 3WhiteElfElder
How did Molly Weasley get in the picture and shriek about Liana being married...she was not one those that traveled to East City?

The gate is now portable and tied into the moral plane...that is scary as all get out. If someone goes before The Gate, do they now appear before Liana?
9/24/2019 c2 N. A. Wennerholm
As for the entity known as Truth and the fact that according to Scripture in the Abrahamic faiths The Heavenly father Hates Layers and People who abuse their power threw manipulations and other methods. So am thinking the Truth should send Dumbledore visions about what his sentence is going to be because of his actions and crimes that have ruined countless lives. So as a result making it clear he is not going to Heaven but to what many call Hell. But in Hebrew is known As Gehenna and to the Greeks Tartarus. Which means the Grave to start with then when Judgement day is held after Armageddon where many will then be sent to the Lake of For those who's sins/crimes are too great and refuse to see what they did is wrong and refuse to repent of the Harm they have caused and I don't see this Dumbledore doing that. And as a result in other fanfictions, the authors did just that. In some stories many crossovers He his sent to the fields of punishment and in others, he is sent to Hela who punishes him dearly in another Story he is Punished by one or more of the Arch-Angels by order of the Heavenly Father. And in quite a few Stories Dumbledore is even written show he is an atheist and refuses to acknowledge that God Exists along with Angels and Demons and The Devil(s). But in the Stories, he is proven that he is wrong and that he is going to have to answer for his crimes/sins.
9/24/2019 c2 luvan1mefang1rl
awesome lol now what will happen next lol next chapt n updates plz lol. do ur best n never give up
9/24/2019 c2 Jostanos
Sakura, I have four words for you concerning this rewrite:

FLAWLESS VICTORY! *eye smiles*

I think that I have read those stories too, Sakura, but I also do not remember their names.
9/24/2019 c2 3LadyOfTheIsle
The third fic you are looking for has apparently been removed from but it's on Ao3 under the name "It's Time to Begin".
9/24/2019 c2 xXxOtAkU-444xXx
I really like it
9/24/2019 c2 nextss6
So happy your updating this story! Looking forward to more. Thank you for all your hard work!
9/24/2019 c2 StrongGuy159
Cool chapter continue please.
9/18/2019 c1 fanficaddict145
3/20/2019 c1 Daemo
Hey this is amazing! Hope that you will continue!
2/15/2019 c1 yaoishipsforlife
that's kinda cool with the gate becoming part of liana. hope for an update in the neatr future!
12/25/2018 c1 11sondowth
Please update
12/10/2018 c1 1Mismatched Melody
please please update soon
8/24/2018 c1 Wika0304
please update, this story is great
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