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7/12/2016 c1 2253910
Please update it. You adopted the story but haven't done anything with it. Please fulfill the responsibility you took on by adopting it.
6/18/2016 c1 xXxOtAkU-444xXx
I love it! **
6/13/2016 c1 Noxy the Proxy
Well then. I wonder what happens next.
6/11/2016 c1 Code Zero
You're stupid , all what you did was put together the 4 first chapters of the original fic in a only page!
And change the name of Anna to Liana!
And above all when you have written in the synopsis saying that would only "slight" Dumbledore bashing, you used the original chapter 3-4 of extreme bashing!
I say that you should begin to zero and correct the mistakes.
Sorry if i was rude and callous to you, but i believe what i said above is no more that pure truth.
5/29/2016 c1 4tf330129
Keep it up :)
5/1/2016 c1 16FallenNiji
Please update soon, it's really good.
5/1/2016 c1 FallenNiji
Please update soon, it's really good.
4/27/2016 c1 3Nameless Angel 00
Tch hehehehe poor Dumb-Old-Door his life is going to be living hell now.
3/30/2016 c1 draco7347
love this story cant wait for new chapters
3/25/2016 c1 Guest
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update THIS, and your OTHER stories, again SOON! Thank you!
3/21/2016 c1 10nahte123456
I like your writing, but you have a problem with characters(just some hopefully helpful criticism) like when Bradly mentions the gate or Liana tells Edward abut her marriage, that's just not how humans talk, that's exposition, people don't talk in exposition, sometimes they can give information, but they don't just sprout it off.
3/20/2016 c1 1Silence in the Rain
Great story so far! I can't wait to see the next chapter! And oh man is Dumblydora gonna have a big surprise *laughs with evil glee*
3/11/2016 c1 maestro de la flama blanca
muy buena historia continuala por favor.
2/21/2016 c1 Faery66
Hope ro read more soon.

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2/19/2016 c1 StrongGuy159
Cool chapter continue please.
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