for Time Travelling Percy2/3 c3 Guest
Update? Please? This is really good a I hope that one day you continue it.
Update? Please? This is really good a I hope that one day you continue it.
5/16/2024 c3 Guest
after this trojan war thing you can do like a time skip to like the battle with the romans or something.
after this trojan war thing you can do like a time skip to like the battle with the romans or something.
711/9/2021 c3 Rose
Can you make Percy and Annabeth (Tartarus time period) come? And please update.
Can you make Percy and Annabeth (Tartarus time period) come? And please update.
1/22/2021 c3 Guest
PLEEASE FINISH THIS
PLEEASE FINISH THIS
10/29/2020 c3 Guest
Wha... wher be they new chapters?!
Wha... wher be they new chapters?!
5/25/2020 c3 Guest
I am german so dont ask about my english but this Story is really nice so please write the next Part soon
I am german so dont ask about my english but this Story is really nice so please write the next Part soon
5/6/2019 c2 thezestywalru
This story has promise, but I do have a few notes to make. Hestia would not say b.c. That is a term modern humans use that actually means "before Christ". It would make more sense if you said "It's been x amount of years since Kronos was defeated. You also switch between 3rd and 1st person POV, and it's really confusing trying to keep up.
I hoped this helped you!
thezestywalru
This story has promise, but I do have a few notes to make. Hestia would not say b.c. That is a term modern humans use that actually means "before Christ". It would make more sense if you said "It's been x amount of years since Kronos was defeated. You also switch between 3rd and 1st person POV, and it's really confusing trying to keep up.
I hoped this helped you!
thezestywalru