for Captured2/26/2022 c23 
8SomethingAncient
It's honestly hard to believe that Kisuke first went to Unohana instead of Orihime, whose powers are the best healing abilities in Bleach because she rewrites reality. I mean, with how well drawn-out the story has been up until now... it just feels very out of place from a writing perspective. Either Urahara is completely out of his mind or... was Orihime forgotten about? No offense meant, that's just how it feels to me.
Otherwise it's been a compelling read.
8SomethingAncientIt's honestly hard to believe that Kisuke first went to Unohana instead of Orihime, whose powers are the best healing abilities in Bleach because she rewrites reality. I mean, with how well drawn-out the story has been up until now... it just feels very out of place from a writing perspective. Either Urahara is completely out of his mind or... was Orihime forgotten about? No offense meant, that's just how it feels to me.
Otherwise it's been a compelling read.
10/6/2017 c27 8ConfusedFangirl13
Poor Ichigo. I hope everything turns out okay for her. And I really want her friends to be able to see her too. That might make her feel better
8ConfusedFangirl13Poor Ichigo. I hope everything turns out okay for her. And I really want her friends to be able to see her too. That might make her feel better
8/20/2017 c16 0Shard0
I swear if he gets her pregnant if I KILL HIM! SEND HIM TO THE DEEPEST DARKEST PIT OF HELL WITH SO MUCH PAIN THAT HE GOES INSANE IN A NANO SECOND!
I swear if he gets her pregnant if I KILL HIM! SEND HIM TO THE DEEPEST DARKEST PIT OF HELL WITH SO MUCH PAIN THAT HE GOES INSANE IN A NANO SECOND!
8/20/2017 c14 0Shard0
Let the plan of revenge begin to forge and breake through to form a tysune,hurricane,tsunami,blizzards,tornadoes,
landslides,earthquakes, and more form a storm so big, a fierce form of unstoppable and unstable nature like no other, form a storm of great magnitude, strength, and swiftness that none can survive against the sheer force of being near it. Let them pay. Make them hurt. They will suffer for what they did.
Let the plan of revenge begin to forge and breake through to form a tysune,hurricane,tsunami,blizzards,tornadoes,
landslides,earthquakes, and more form a storm so big, a fierce form of unstoppable and unstable nature like no other, form a storm of great magnitude, strength, and swiftness that none can survive against the sheer force of being near it. Let them pay. Make them hurt. They will suffer for what they did.
8/20/2017 c11 0Shard0
Let the gates of he spear and claim her as queen. Show her power and replenish her resolve.
Let the army of bone be at her command and fight for their new master as they bow down to her.
As she dons the armor and protection of those let those who hurt her suffer and feel pain like no other.
Those that struck her will be struck down by armies of bone and rotting flesh.
Rain of acid and blood rain down on the desolate battlefield as corpses lay to rot.
As she dons her armor, swords, and bow to fight her power emerges, through pain, struggle, and heartbreak.
Let those that fought under her seek shelter and those not be struck down in the twinkle of an eye.
As the lone figure stand clinging to concensus from torture they suffered, beaten and battered prone form stands tall, kneeling with their remaining strength. They shall rise back up to strike again as corpses litter the field, blood painting the ground.
Armor, swords, and bow stained in blood as the gruesome scene is taken in by all whose left.
Holy- I made a dark poem of revenge didn't I? /\
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Let the gates of he spear and claim her as queen. Show her power and replenish her resolve.
Let the army of bone be at her command and fight for their new master as they bow down to her.
As she dons the armor and protection of those let those who hurt her suffer and feel pain like no other.
Those that struck her will be struck down by armies of bone and rotting flesh.
Rain of acid and blood rain down on the desolate battlefield as corpses lay to rot.
As she dons her armor, swords, and bow to fight her power emerges, through pain, struggle, and heartbreak.
Let those that fought under her seek shelter and those not be struck down in the twinkle of an eye.
As the lone figure stand clinging to concensus from torture they suffered, beaten and battered prone form stands tall, kneeling with their remaining strength. They shall rise back up to strike again as corpses litter the field, blood painting the ground.
Armor, swords, and bow stained in blood as the gruesome scene is taken in by all whose left.
Holy- I made a dark poem of revenge didn't I? /\
$&\
8/20/2017 c10 0Shard0
Ohhhhh. That reminds me. Add hell armor. It would be priceless if she suddenly activates her fullbring and hel armor and powers. XD oh and she discovers she can phase through walls.
Ohhhhh. That reminds me. Add hell armor. It would be priceless if she suddenly activates her fullbring and hel armor and powers. XD oh and she discovers she can phase through walls.
8/20/2017 c6 0Shard0
Oh shit!
Sorry, I'm listening to kinda cheerful mix of music so I don't think I am taking this as serious as I should. But on the bright side it's letting me read faster even if I'm too silly.
Oh shit!
Sorry, I'm listening to kinda cheerful mix of music so I don't think I am taking this as serious as I should. But on the bright side it's letting me read faster even if I'm too silly.
3/5/2017 c23 Andrey258
Man,this was so sad and intense. It actually made me cry thinking at how Ichigo looked and felt. Kinda sucks they did not wait for Orihime,otherwise she could have healed Ichigo faster. Keep up with the good work without stopping to find inspiration for it,make sure you PM me when you have time and have a nice day with strippers.
Man,this was so sad and intense. It actually made me cry thinking at how Ichigo looked and felt. Kinda sucks they did not wait for Orihime,otherwise she could have healed Ichigo faster. Keep up with the good work without stopping to find inspiration for it,make sure you PM me when you have time and have a nice day with strippers.