for Let's Try This Again12/4 c1 UnluckyBastard
I am not satisfied with this. Not only does Harry NOT un-alive Dumbass and the 3 Potters, but it also, in a way, make Dumbledore's plan work. He 'molded' Harry into a perfect weapon to kill Voldy. My vindictiveness is not satisfied with this. He didn't even torment the Potter's! Or make them regret abandoning him to the Dursley's. Come on Harry! What happened to 'I will make them all pay'? At least hurt em a little.
Good chapter though author. And ty for sharing!
I am not satisfied with this. Not only does Harry NOT un-alive Dumbass and the 3 Potters, but it also, in a way, make Dumbledore's plan work. He 'molded' Harry into a perfect weapon to kill Voldy. My vindictiveness is not satisfied with this. He didn't even torment the Potter's! Or make them regret abandoning him to the Dursley's. Come on Harry! What happened to 'I will make them all pay'? At least hurt em a little.
Good chapter though author. And ty for sharing!
11/8 c4 habba
Many of these fanfictions fall to the same trope. Harry keeps explaining his actions and magic all the time. He makes it a point to remove any mystery there is to him and just keeps on talking about anything and everything he really shouldn't be talking off.
Many of these fanfictions fall to the same trope. Harry keeps explaining his actions and magic all the time. He makes it a point to remove any mystery there is to him and just keeps on talking about anything and everything he really shouldn't be talking off.
9/11 c23 Edsu-Eji
A great shame the story is abandoned. A greater still that author saw the fit to explain his burning out by Disney when author literally wrote the story about legends and not canon imao. Why bother with Drisney canon at all?
Ah well. Still, I absolute loved the story even if I wish there were more adventures with Harry and Revan
A great shame the story is abandoned. A greater still that author saw the fit to explain his burning out by Disney when author literally wrote the story about legends and not canon imao. Why bother with Drisney canon at all?
Ah well. Still, I absolute loved the story even if I wish there were more adventures with Harry and Revan
8/31 c23 
3Western Witch
Shame about how you feel in regards to writing this story as it's pretty awesome to read, but I understand.
I hope you get to finish this off sooner rather then later.
3Western WitchShame about how you feel in regards to writing this story as it's pretty awesome to read, but I understand.
I hope you get to finish this off sooner rather then later.
7/29 c23 omh666
I have to admit, when I started this story I was a little concerned at how it was going. Wasn't too sure I would enjoy it anywhere near as much as I did, or do. Here's hoping you get the chance and inspiration to at least close off this arc, even if you never write more in the Starwars world. Thanks for what you've already written and again for posting it here for us to read.
I have to admit, when I started this story I was a little concerned at how it was going. Wasn't too sure I would enjoy it anywhere near as much as I did, or do. Here's hoping you get the chance and inspiration to at least close off this arc, even if you never write more in the Starwars world. Thanks for what you've already written and again for posting it here for us to read.
5/31 c1 1jiromanawari
didn't even bother reading til the latest chapter, the way Harry is too passive and submissive to other people is a huge turn off. Also, his power level seems to flip-flop at every scenario. This is hot trash.
1jiromanawarididn't even bother reading til the latest chapter, the way Harry is too passive and submissive to other people is a huge turn off. Also, his power level seems to flip-flop at every scenario. This is hot trash.
5/31 c4 jiromanawari
that was piss poor showing of using battle magic. For a supposed "wizarding veteran" his performance in the fight was absolutely subpar.
that was piss poor showing of using battle magic. For a supposed "wizarding veteran" his performance in the fight was absolutely subpar.
4/1 c23 Vortozan
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AN: Alright, here's the deal, I'm pretty burnt out on Star Wars and writing this story has become something of a painful chore.
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Yeah, I could feel that fact as the story progressed, it was fun to read but I could feel how hard it was getting to write. I think you’ve ended it at the perfect time as usual. I’d much prefer you to stop writing something you don’t enjoy than to push yourself. Especially since you’ve proven again and again that you can create masterpieces if you find yourself enjoying a story you’ve written.
Thank you for another amazing read as always. You a Legend!
- Vortz
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AN: Alright, here's the deal, I'm pretty burnt out on Star Wars and writing this story has become something of a painful chore.
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Yeah, I could feel that fact as the story progressed, it was fun to read but I could feel how hard it was getting to write. I think you’ve ended it at the perfect time as usual. I’d much prefer you to stop writing something you don’t enjoy than to push yourself. Especially since you’ve proven again and again that you can create masterpieces if you find yourself enjoying a story you’ve written.
Thank you for another amazing read as always. You a Legend!
- Vortz
3/31 c1 Vortozan
Ok. This Harry has had it the worst, by far.
His parents and brother were completely reprehensible, worse by far than Dumbledore or his uncle and aunt. Followed by Dumbledore, then by his relatives that he grew up with.
I honestly can’t blame him at all for wanting to kill them.
Although actions speak louder than words here since he never did kill his Aunt and Uncle, or his Cousin. He literally made sure they weren’t in the house when he set it on fire. Sounds like he made excuses to himself to avoid taking their lives despite all they’ve done to him.
That or he was planning something else and just gave up in the end cause he just wants to die.
I really don’t blame him for wanting to die either, like holy shit his life has had no positives and so, sooooo many extremely big negatives.
Thank you for the read, 10/10 first chapter. Your a legend!
- Vortz
Ok. This Harry has had it the worst, by far.
His parents and brother were completely reprehensible, worse by far than Dumbledore or his uncle and aunt. Followed by Dumbledore, then by his relatives that he grew up with.
I honestly can’t blame him at all for wanting to kill them.
Although actions speak louder than words here since he never did kill his Aunt and Uncle, or his Cousin. He literally made sure they weren’t in the house when he set it on fire. Sounds like he made excuses to himself to avoid taking their lives despite all they’ve done to him.
That or he was planning something else and just gave up in the end cause he just wants to die.
I really don’t blame him for wanting to die either, like holy shit his life has had no positives and so, sooooo many extremely big negatives.
Thank you for the read, 10/10 first chapter. Your a legend!
- Vortz
12/27/2023 c4 Bronze
It's funny, I always read about Bombardo in almost every HP fic. In only one have I ever read about someone using Ballista for taking out walls as well as large groups of fighters. Death Eaters were cornered in third or fourth floor room with double doors dividing it in half. They'd reinforced the wall and door to hide behind as well as lean through or around to fire spells. Ordinary spells did nothing. Then this woman who knows old siege spells uses Ballista to destroy a goodly sized chunk of the wall. To say the Death Eaters were surprised and unprepared for that is like saying the ocean is wet. In that fic Bombardo was more of an area effect spell than a direct attack one. Don't ask for the title as it was so long ago, I don't remember it. Anyhoo, getting back to this story, I'm rather surprised Harry didn't take two of those Sith Lightsabers. One to use and one to examine. Should he say accidentally crack the crystal in the one he's examining he'd still have a fully functioning one. As to his killing that Sith, it was him or Harry. Not gonna bother feeling sorry for him. Yeah, it is very unfair that Harry can't die but blame it on Death. It made the Hallows along with their curse.
It's funny, I always read about Bombardo in almost every HP fic. In only one have I ever read about someone using Ballista for taking out walls as well as large groups of fighters. Death Eaters were cornered in third or fourth floor room with double doors dividing it in half. They'd reinforced the wall and door to hide behind as well as lean through or around to fire spells. Ordinary spells did nothing. Then this woman who knows old siege spells uses Ballista to destroy a goodly sized chunk of the wall. To say the Death Eaters were surprised and unprepared for that is like saying the ocean is wet. In that fic Bombardo was more of an area effect spell than a direct attack one. Don't ask for the title as it was so long ago, I don't remember it. Anyhoo, getting back to this story, I'm rather surprised Harry didn't take two of those Sith Lightsabers. One to use and one to examine. Should he say accidentally crack the crystal in the one he's examining he'd still have a fully functioning one. As to his killing that Sith, it was him or Harry. Not gonna bother feeling sorry for him. Yeah, it is very unfair that Harry can't die but blame it on Death. It made the Hallows along with their curse.
12/27/2023 c3 Guest
Sooner or later Harry will figure it out. Then he'll mix it with his magic and watch out!
Sooner or later Harry will figure it out. Then he'll mix it with his magic and watch out!
12/27/2023 c2 Bronze
Well, this should prove interesting or at least something to do for a while.
Well, this should prove interesting or at least something to do for a while.
12/27/2023 c1 Bronze
I can't imagine something like this ever truly happening buy if it did, I think the poor soul who it did would beg to die after a time. To live to watch everybody you know, and love die while you continue on would be maddening.
I can't imagine something like this ever truly happening buy if it did, I think the poor soul who it did would beg to die after a time. To live to watch everybody you know, and love die while you continue on would be maddening.