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12/19/2018 c4 7Althea Sirius
Joseph?
And I think their weapon advances are a bit similar.
12/19/2018 c2 Althea Sirius
Daniel?
And it could use some polish, but good chapter.
12/19/2018 c1 Althea Sirius
An interesting start.
11/20/2018 c3 WowohWow0
Aww I would have preferred Jack having the big long pointy ears there probably would have been some funny reactions to his oversized ears people might even have asked him if he was a new kind of Faunus that would have been funny
3/6/2018 c1 JohanNishigami
Good storyline however you are really rushing it I know it's hard to not rush it as you probably wanna skip right to the action parts but in order for the story to progress properly you need to keep a steady pace and add better detail to the scene around you and to the transformations to the people that may have them for the light jak transformation something like this should work" soon he began to rise into the air, not a moment after that display to no-one a heavenly divine light shone down from the sky and his hair slowly became a grayish white his eyes turned into the same color and soon he lowered down onto the ground and he put his hands behind his back as if he was some sort of deity "
1/14/2017 c4 StrongGuy159
Cool story continue please.
12/5/2016 c4 2spyro259
Yeah please continue the story
4/16/2016 c4 3zeldawolffang
i hope this continues :D

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