
6/7/2016 c1 LightFiction
Well this was a lovely piece! I really liked the style of writing and the whole idea was something new (at least to me :)).
I'm not a fan of Luna but I really like Kingsley. However, the line about Kingsley's gaze from Luna's face hit me with something, I absolutely loved it.
Good luck with writing!
Well this was a lovely piece! I really liked the style of writing and the whole idea was something new (at least to me :)).
I'm not a fan of Luna but I really like Kingsley. However, the line about Kingsley's gaze from Luna's face hit me with something, I absolutely loved it.
Good luck with writing!
4/10/2016 c1 Dante1612
just found your story! loved it and read it in one! a realy impressive story you created there!
just found your story! loved it and read it in one! a realy impressive story you created there!
4/7/2016 c1
8sainlyinsain
That was, of course, probably the BEST soulmate story I've ever read. It was beautiful and sad and it was brilliant.

That was, of course, probably the BEST soulmate story I've ever read. It was beautiful and sad and it was brilliant.
4/7/2016 c1 Guest
I fucking love this story. PLEASE EXPAND THIS
I fucking love this story. PLEASE EXPAND THIS
3/5/2016 c1
7abovetheserpentine
I loved this concept, and Hermione's pain was very real. But me being me, I was disappointed at the lack of physical confirmation. First kisses are wonderful things to read about :P

I loved this concept, and Hermione's pain was very real. But me being me, I was disappointed at the lack of physical confirmation. First kisses are wonderful things to read about :P
2/3/2016 c1 Guest
Beautiful! I love the original idea and how the story mostly followed canon. The format took a little getting used to but once I figured it out it was very well written! 10/10 The only thing I would suggest is that the timeline was a little hard to follow of what was exactly Hermione and what was Hermione through Harry in the the middle parts (like with Snape, Dumbledore, and Slughorn).
Beautiful! I love the original idea and how the story mostly followed canon. The format took a little getting used to but once I figured it out it was very well written! 10/10 The only thing I would suggest is that the timeline was a little hard to follow of what was exactly Hermione and what was Hermione through Harry in the the middle parts (like with Snape, Dumbledore, and Slughorn).
2/1/2016 c1 Linda
This was a fantastic story. I loved the concept of other marks, the pairings, basically everything! Fred and Lavender was a huge surprise but I loved it. She had picked the wrong Weasley. Harry and Hermione were so well written, I wish the story never ended but I am glad it did the way it did. Thank you for posting this!
This was a fantastic story. I loved the concept of other marks, the pairings, basically everything! Fred and Lavender was a huge surprise but I loved it. She had picked the wrong Weasley. Harry and Hermione were so well written, I wish the story never ended but I am glad it did the way it did. Thank you for posting this!