for Ace's Universe9/16/2016 c5 
21White Fire the Dragon
That part with Mr. Smiley, Onion, and fire, I see what you did there.
21White Fire the DragonThat part with Mr. Smiley, Onion, and fire, I see what you did there.
8/3/2016 c3 Guest
LOL like "Do not worry Ruby I will" that probably caught Garnet off guard
LOL like "Do not worry Ruby I will" that probably caught Garnet off guard
8/3/2016 c3 1percy morgesten
the story is very good but what of the translator google was not nesesario fanfiction has its own translator (the globe icon) so if you want this written stories in your language no problem
1percy morgestenthe story is very good but what of the translator google was not nesesario fanfiction has its own translator (the globe icon) so if you want this written stories in your language no problem
2/1/2016 c1 73katmar1994
I love it already! Can't wait for the next chapter! And not to criticize or anything but you might want to fix some of your sentences.
73katmar1994I love it already! Can't wait for the next chapter! And not to criticize or anything but you might want to fix some of your sentences.