for The Legacies of Batman6/12 c1 Ella8182
Hi,I'm Ella courtney ! I just finished reading your story, and I have to say it's absolutely captivating!Your storytelling is immersive, the characters feel so real, and the plot had me hooked from start to finish. I’d love to share a detailed review because your work deserves all the praise! Keep writing your talent is truly something special
Hi,I'm Ella courtney ! I just finished reading your story, and I have to say it's absolutely captivating!Your storytelling is immersive, the characters feel so real, and the plot had me hooked from start to finish. I’d love to share a detailed review because your work deserves all the praise! Keep writing your talent is truly something special
11/14/2024 c8 
2Djoklecjan
Mate, You don’t have to apologize for anything. Like, at all
Writing is first and foremost, a hobby, beating yourself over not posting another chapter is not the right thing to do.
Write because you want to share with us your passion for the genre, not because you are obliged to do it. That what truly leads to the lack of motivation.
I don’t have to wish you success because I know you will do it. You are clearly a passionate guy with great imagination. You just have to let it flow.
Small tip to you my fellow - Get obsessed over your story, think about all of the powerful moments you are going to show, think how reader’s jaw land on the floor, then plan out the details, smaller arcs that will get your characters into the desired climax.
And people will follow and fav.
Hope you are doing great!
DJ
2DjoklecjanMate, You don’t have to apologize for anything. Like, at all
Writing is first and foremost, a hobby, beating yourself over not posting another chapter is not the right thing to do.
Write because you want to share with us your passion for the genre, not because you are obliged to do it. That what truly leads to the lack of motivation.
I don’t have to wish you success because I know you will do it. You are clearly a passionate guy with great imagination. You just have to let it flow.
Small tip to you my fellow - Get obsessed over your story, think about all of the powerful moments you are going to show, think how reader’s jaw land on the floor, then plan out the details, smaller arcs that will get your characters into the desired climax.
And people will follow and fav.
Hope you are doing great!
DJ
6/22/2023 c7 TW
Nice story hope you get back to writing it some day soon.
Nice story hope you get back to writing it some day soon.
12/7/2022 c6 b4tling
Its honestly sad because no one usually acknowledges the fact that Talia technically r*ped Bruce since she drugged him and all... that's why I never really shipped them. It's seriously overlooked
Its honestly sad because no one usually acknowledges the fact that Talia technically r*ped Bruce since she drugged him and all... that's why I never really shipped them. It's seriously overlooked
2/25/2022 c7 Guest
Update please?
Update please?
9/19/2020 c3 Guest
Writr more
Writr more
6/22/2020 c1 45evolution-500
Good start, although be sure to separate the dialogue from the description. Some grammatical and punctuation errors here and there, but it's a very impressive beginning.
45evolution-500Good start, although be sure to separate the dialogue from the description. Some grammatical and punctuation errors here and there, but it's a very impressive beginning.
5/20/2020 c1 Guest
Write more
Write more
3/17/2019 c6 Rick O'Shay25
I never watched the Teen Titans Go! show, but I do know you are just one of many fans who hate it. Why such hate?
Batwoman would have made a good mate for Dick or Bruce; if only they didn't make her an androphobe. But if Dick gets Starfire and/or Batgirl, then Bruce can have Batwoman added to his harem. :)
A little mixing and mashing with other versions of the JL universe would be nice. :)
Though you better clarify as to which costume is worn by each character.
One thing I hate about 52 is how they insisted on having Hawkman instead of Hawkgirl.
PLEASE find a way to show mercy to Terra.
Damian is older by a few hours? Did Talia suffer some kind of birthing complication?
www . verywellfamily labor-and-birth-with-twins-2753691
The average wait is only 17 minutes.
I do apologize for saying that you deprived us in the previous chapter.
Even if the wounds are minor, Nightwing is going to feel sticky-and-icky from his own blood.
Oh dear, is Nightwing thinking of Jason Todd?
It's weird, I can take a punch better than I can take a needle.
I dunno if I could hear concern in Damian's voice; still, Alfred's need to censor Dick was HILARIOUS.
Adrian re-awoke my desire to hear/read how Talia would have "given them the talk".
I gotta wonder; what do you think the twins and their father would think of a Yautja preying on the city's criminals?
I think Damian's disdain for the older Robin suit is genuine; it DOES look rather feminine, given how much exposed leg it provides. One would think Batman has a thing for boys, in a way, if you catch my drift.
Holy crap, how did Red Robin's suit go from a drawing to a real thing is so short a time?
I never watched the Teen Titans Go! show, but I do know you are just one of many fans who hate it. Why such hate?
Batwoman would have made a good mate for Dick or Bruce; if only they didn't make her an androphobe. But if Dick gets Starfire and/or Batgirl, then Bruce can have Batwoman added to his harem. :)
A little mixing and mashing with other versions of the JL universe would be nice. :)
Though you better clarify as to which costume is worn by each character.
One thing I hate about 52 is how they insisted on having Hawkman instead of Hawkgirl.
PLEASE find a way to show mercy to Terra.
Damian is older by a few hours? Did Talia suffer some kind of birthing complication?
www . verywellfamily labor-and-birth-with-twins-2753691
The average wait is only 17 minutes.
I do apologize for saying that you deprived us in the previous chapter.
Even if the wounds are minor, Nightwing is going to feel sticky-and-icky from his own blood.
Oh dear, is Nightwing thinking of Jason Todd?
It's weird, I can take a punch better than I can take a needle.
I dunno if I could hear concern in Damian's voice; still, Alfred's need to censor Dick was HILARIOUS.
Adrian re-awoke my desire to hear/read how Talia would have "given them the talk".
I gotta wonder; what do you think the twins and their father would think of a Yautja preying on the city's criminals?
I think Damian's disdain for the older Robin suit is genuine; it DOES look rather feminine, given how much exposed leg it provides. One would think Batman has a thing for boys, in a way, if you catch my drift.
Holy crap, how did Red Robin's suit go from a drawing to a real thing is so short a time?
3/16/2019 c5 Rick O'Shay25
I think the story of these two boys should go straight to Teen Titans, bypassing that awful shite known as Bad Blood, while Talia moves into Wayne Manor.
Hmm, you take inspiration from movies and shows... hmm, what if you didn't like a franchise because of how it was handled, but you DID see potential in it? Perhaps, you could be inspired to write a story that fixes what was screwed up about the original story? What genres are your favorite?
LOL, wow, I was expecting Damian, not Adrian, to be the one addressing the two women.
Given their youth and lack of muscle, I still think the SoB story would have been better if it was explained that the two boys were "enhanced", like with say, cybernetics, or that chemical-performance-enhancer that Oscorp developed in Spider-Man, the 2002 film.
Aw man, you deprived me of that hilarious moment that resulted in Nightwing getting cuts all over his body. I suppose, Nightwing wouldn't have been able to tie BOTH boys up. Damian alone put up a VERY good fight, even he lost.
Too bad Nightwing doesn't have a secret distress signal on his person, just in case.
I think the story of these two boys should go straight to Teen Titans, bypassing that awful shite known as Bad Blood, while Talia moves into Wayne Manor.
Hmm, you take inspiration from movies and shows... hmm, what if you didn't like a franchise because of how it was handled, but you DID see potential in it? Perhaps, you could be inspired to write a story that fixes what was screwed up about the original story? What genres are your favorite?
LOL, wow, I was expecting Damian, not Adrian, to be the one addressing the two women.
Given their youth and lack of muscle, I still think the SoB story would have been better if it was explained that the two boys were "enhanced", like with say, cybernetics, or that chemical-performance-enhancer that Oscorp developed in Spider-Man, the 2002 film.
Aw man, you deprived me of that hilarious moment that resulted in Nightwing getting cuts all over his body. I suppose, Nightwing wouldn't have been able to tie BOTH boys up. Damian alone put up a VERY good fight, even he lost.
Too bad Nightwing doesn't have a secret distress signal on his person, just in case.
3/4/2019 c4 Rick O'Shay25
Ah, the inseparability of identical twins. I know it from personal experience, though not in a violently cute way like this. :)
Ever watched the Archer show? If so, can you picture Sterling Archer as Bruce Wayne?
I do wonder if Bruce ever made Damian officially his son.
"hacked an inroad"; you meant "hacked into N.O.R.A.D."
Oh boy. They will meet Nightwing, and I would have LOVED to see the fight, but it's perhaps all the better how the movie skips it. It's funnier that way, that's for sure.
Ah, the inseparability of identical twins. I know it from personal experience, though not in a violently cute way like this. :)
Ever watched the Archer show? If so, can you picture Sterling Archer as Bruce Wayne?
I do wonder if Bruce ever made Damian officially his son.
"hacked an inroad"; you meant "hacked into N.O.R.A.D."
Oh boy. They will meet Nightwing, and I would have LOVED to see the fight, but it's perhaps all the better how the movie skips it. It's funnier that way, that's for sure.