for Agents of WADDLES6/19/2017 c12 Guest
Abandoned, eh? Not sure what I was expecting.
Abandoned, eh? Not sure what I was expecting.
2/24/2017 c12 wanderer21
The story is great so far. I will admit that I stopped reading due to the introductions of the ocs but I recently pushed through and with more background being given out makes the characters more fleshed out.
The brief description of the ocs when the poll was up was hard to take note of considering the possible cast were characters we had known, heard of, or easily been looked up on the Internet. With how they were first introduced, it was like, for me, a bunch of words with no face for reference. Kinda like a asking someone to draw a character from your head, and it would end up differently for each artist you ask to draw.
I am glad though that I continued reading and would like to tell you that you did a great job with this story.
The story is great so far. I will admit that I stopped reading due to the introductions of the ocs but I recently pushed through and with more background being given out makes the characters more fleshed out.
The brief description of the ocs when the poll was up was hard to take note of considering the possible cast were characters we had known, heard of, or easily been looked up on the Internet. With how they were first introduced, it was like, for me, a bunch of words with no face for reference. Kinda like a asking someone to draw a character from your head, and it would end up differently for each artist you ask to draw.
I am glad though that I continued reading and would like to tell you that you did a great job with this story.
1/26/2017 c12 
47Alisi Thorndyke
This is getting good! :) I wonder with SIN being as divided as they are, they can take Waddles's team. Mostly likely not :)
Great job and could you inform CMR that their chapter is first on my list to read and review today? :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
47Alisi ThorndykeThis is getting good! :) I wonder with SIN being as divided as they are, they can take Waddles's team. Mostly likely not :)
Great job and could you inform CMR that their chapter is first on my list to read and review today? :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
1/7/2017 c12 11OMAC001
So is this an OC adventure with OC villains, cause I'm not familiar with the Brotherhood...
11OMAC001So is this an OC adventure with OC villains, cause I'm not familiar with the Brotherhood...
1/7/2017 c12 nightmaster000
Happy New Year hope you had Happy Holidays.
First chapter of the New Year was great. I really like the OC villains you've created. I can't wait to see how our agents will fair against the Sins.
The twist with their being a lot more than one Pandora's box was great. Plus it makes sense considering this is part of mass cartoon crossover, and plenty of shows have used the Pandora's box.
Hmm can we expect Pandora herself to appear in the story?
Happy New Year hope you had Happy Holidays.
First chapter of the New Year was great. I really like the OC villains you've created. I can't wait to see how our agents will fair against the Sins.
The twist with their being a lot more than one Pandora's box was great. Plus it makes sense considering this is part of mass cartoon crossover, and plenty of shows have used the Pandora's box.
Hmm can we expect Pandora herself to appear in the story?
1/7/2017 c12 8The Keeper of Worlds
My, interesting twists to the organization here. I can't wait to see how it goes. But, you misspelled my OC name EVERYWHERE here. It's Gage, NOT G-a-l-e. Otherwise, all looks good and interesting.
8The Keeper of WorldsMy, interesting twists to the organization here. I can't wait to see how it goes. But, you misspelled my OC name EVERYWHERE here. It's Gage, NOT G-a-l-e. Otherwise, all looks good and interesting.
12/22/2016 c11 47Alisi Thorndyke
I think I missed something, but what happened to Manny? Don't you hate it when life makes you forget things of leisure? I haven't gotten a break before now. A shame right?
But Merry Christmas and Happy New Year if you don't hear anything from me before then :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
47Alisi ThorndykeI think I missed something, but what happened to Manny? Don't you hate it when life makes you forget things of leisure? I haven't gotten a break before now. A shame right?
But Merry Christmas and Happy New Year if you don't hear anything from me before then :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
9/11/2016 c1 Guest
You know if Mabel is so useless and nothing but comedic relief, you should just dispose of her.
That way she'll be useful as a guilt trip. In all your stories Pacifica seems to be way more important than her...
So what do you say?
You know if Mabel is so useless and nothing but comedic relief, you should just dispose of her.
That way she'll be useful as a guilt trip. In all your stories Pacifica seems to be way more important than her...
So what do you say?
7/14/2016 c10 nightmaster000
Another wonderful chapter. It seem's you can find anything for sell these days. You just have to known where to look.
Another wonderful chapter. It seem's you can find anything for sell these days. You just have to known where to look.