4/18/2016 c6 Jo
I love this one I hope you do the house mystery next

4/15/2016 c6 nightmaster000
Another great chapter.

Will this new team of young villains eventually start working for/with N.I.C.E? If so will Frida tell them any of the important information she knows, like the secret identities of the Ninja and Shezow, or the location of the Galactic Guardians base on earth?

Sadly even though the heroes have won they've also lost. The scales have tipped further towards the light. Which can only lead to giving more advantage to the forces of Darkness.

So Zoe is starting to consider going hero. Wonder how things will turn out for her.

Oh have some more obscure cartoon suggestions you could use if you're interested. The Barefoot Bandits, Teamo Supremo, Sidekick, and Tak and the power of Juju.

4/15/2016 c6 8The Keeper of Worlds
We'll fudge on the stick, Freida going villian is not good news at all! When she was La Tigressa she was very skilled. Giving her a super powered supernaturally powered music weapon suit is going to be just her perfect theme making it SEVERAL degrees more dangerous.

And the fact light is still up in scale causes many worries. The villains plan to aid light to make their darker plan all the worse!

Stupid cosmic karma scale! Hope our crazy goggle girl comes back to good, but can keep the suit. Hmm, wonder if my boys are up? Oh, and I have a few more ideas to expand on the powers of my OC if you want. Mostly as a trump card that training in here will bring,

3/29/2016 c5 nightmaster000
Spectacular chapter.

Hannibal Bean has been revealed as one of the members of N.I.C.E. excellent choice there by the way.

I loved how you wrote Nyx and Ying. You've really made them come alive.

The scene with Ying pulling a Iago and pretending to be a parrot (Todd's a idiot) was very amusing. :)

I also really enjoyed the reunion/confrontation Riley and Todd had with their old friend. Will we be seeing more about what they feel and think about their encounter with Nyx, and the path she's taken. I'm kind of curious if either of them will start guilt tripping themselves and start thinking the entire situation is all their fault. You have to admit Heroes do sometimes have the habit of doing that.

From what I can gather/guess all the members of N.I.C.E are starting thing's off with recruitment mission to expand their forces. If I'm right I look forward to see if others had as much luck as Hannibal did. If they do succeed will the other recruits and Nyx become a team that works for N.I.C.E?

Any chance of Ying meeting Monroe later on? I ask because I think the two would make great enemies for each other, what with them being both alike yet very different. Their both very serious about things, and try to guide their charges on the path to reach their full potential. However while Monroe does his best to guide June to become a great hero, Ying is doing the opposite trying to make Nyx as evil as possible. I just can't help but think that would cause Monroe to really hate Ying to say the least.

3/29/2016 c5 8The Keeper of Worlds
A descendant of Roy's bird was a shock. Nyx's history with the siblings was definitely a shock and it makes encounters much rougher given what exactly happened, I can't wait to see who else gets recruited and how plans lay out:). Hoping my guy's mission is next. And let me know when you want to run a mission in the 'Cult of the Seven Sins' and I'll give you lore and what not on the entities in charge.

3/16/2016 c4 47Alisi Thorndyke
Ok, I change my vote! I want the mansion of mystery as Dipcifica is my favorite pairing! :) With that said, chapter 11 to DS is in the works as we speak. :)

I don't know why Waddles didn't pick Mabel despite her being his owner. It's not like she wound mess anything up right? I know why he didn't pick her, but still.

I just got a sense of nostalgia myself when reading how Todd replaced Dip and Cifica. :) I really miss that show :)

But great job and now I'm all caught up! :)

Alisi Thorndyke :)

3/7/2016 c4 nightmaster000
Another excellent chapter.

So Dipper and Pacifica have decided to turn down Waddles offer. Sad to see them go, but I'm eager to find out more about Gage and Christ their origins and all that. Also glad to hear even though their leaving the group their still in the story.

I get the feeling sooner or later Mabel will find out Waddles secret, and chance are she won't be happy he hid it from her. Secrets like that have the habit of being revealed sooner or later.

Once again great acronyms. I have to agree they are ironic. I do look forward to finding out who the villains are. I think I already know who one of them is from that skeleton bandidos comment.

Sound's like the villains have a major plan in the works. Will they succeed in their goal to attack D.I.C.S? Sadly the universe and luck is on their side till the balance is restored.

Love the sound of the W.A.D.D.L.E.S first missions. Can't wait to see how each one will turn out. How will each group handle working together on their first mission. Poor Fillmore and Ingrid will probably have their hands full with Dib and Zim. At least with the other teams they don't have to worry about them fighting each other.

3/7/2016 c4 Jonesy
Cool and WHAT the cute couple is gone and replaced with OCS that I don't know (cries) well I expect the best dude which I know you have. So update
1. Ruby rockstar. Start out with Mexican flavor and old time favorite el tigre. Man, safty police in that crime central place (uh oh). And tweedle dumb and tweedle dumber are just asking for wedgies and a good scare.
2. Garden of fire. Time to spice things up. The spies working with magic again and the replacements in high stakes. Jeesh I don't know about their group.
3. Return of the Queen. Jackie Chan references I can see it. The gang near good role models gag up a storm.
4. Mansion of mystery. To wrap up the stories with a return of favorites. Both from cooky shows with weirdness , magic , and lots of energy. Let it begin.
Just watched every detentionaire episode and was awesome and the show and gravity falls both have a pyramid of mystery and answers in a conspiracy.