3/7/2016 c4 6Drahjan
Mysterious House? Cash Prize? This sounds like "No End House". If you don't know what that is, good. I advise that it stays that way.
Mysterious House? Cash Prize? This sounds like "No End House". If you don't know what that is, good. I advise that it stays that way.
3/7/2016 c1 Drahjan
I can't believe that you know "Growing up Creepy"! That was one of the greatest shows of its time. That, and "Grossologists" which I'm sad to see that it's not on the list.
At first, I wasn't sure that I would like this FanFic. Now that I see that there will be some recognizable characters, and non-recognizable characters, this might be exciting. Especially with two ships in here that I know from when the shows were still being aired.
I can't believe that you know "Growing up Creepy"! That was one of the greatest shows of its time. That, and "Grossologists" which I'm sad to see that it's not on the list.
At first, I wasn't sure that I would like this FanFic. Now that I see that there will be some recognizable characters, and non-recognizable characters, this might be exciting. Especially with two ships in here that I know from when the shows were still being aired.
3/7/2016 c4 11OMAC001
Kind of sad that Dipper and Pacifica won't be on the team...officially. I can see them getting involved with the adventures anyway.
Kind of sad that Dipper and Pacifica won't be on the team...officially. I can see them getting involved with the adventures anyway.
2/27/2016 c3 1Araitsume
I'm a bit confused about whether Waddles' technology is so high-end that they respond to his thoughts or he's capable of creating matter and energy due to his powers. Aside from that, the interactions and banter between all of these duos were rather interesting, though I'm heavily biased to the Detentionaire/Gravity Falls stuff as I have been waiting since the former's series finale for something like that. That said, I am puzzled as to what show the Scale of Libra came from it isn't from TMNT 2003. All in all, this has been quite a nice introduction of PHQ, plus the restricted areas have got me worried over the fact that Waddles has the potential to conquer a small country. Lastly, I need to say that the "would-be quitters" mystery can be easily solved by process of elimination... I think.
I'm a bit confused about whether Waddles' technology is so high-end that they respond to his thoughts or he's capable of creating matter and energy due to his powers. Aside from that, the interactions and banter between all of these duos were rather interesting, though I'm heavily biased to the Detentionaire/Gravity Falls stuff as I have been waiting since the former's series finale for something like that. That said, I am puzzled as to what show the Scale of Libra came from it isn't from TMNT 2003. All in all, this has been quite a nice introduction of PHQ, plus the restricted areas have got me worried over the fact that Waddles has the potential to conquer a small country. Lastly, I need to say that the "would-be quitters" mystery can be easily solved by process of elimination... I think.
2/24/2016 c3 nightmaster000
Another excellent chapter.
So Waddles decided to go through with his spinach diet idea for Dipper. Well it can only help his health. Though I don't think it will make him strong like it does Popeye.
I wonder which of them doesn't want to join the team. Hope they will change their minds.
Will any of them tell their friends or family about WADDLES? Even if they don't I could see some like K finding out on their own. Though in K's case she will probably be both worried for her kids but very proud at the same time. Since their in a way following in her footsteps.
Forgot to mention this before the last time we talked. But I do like the name you choose for the group. It probably wasn't easy thinking of a good acronym with Waddles name. So you deserve major props for that.
I'm looking forward to seeing what kind of missions and adventures they will go on. I'm guessing unlike most of you're other stories. Where the characters we're on one main adventure/mission, this story will be having the characters going on multiple adventures/missions. Am I right or wrong?
What new enemies and allies will they make? What other crossovers will get involved? I'm eager to find out. :)
Another excellent chapter.
So Waddles decided to go through with his spinach diet idea for Dipper. Well it can only help his health. Though I don't think it will make him strong like it does Popeye.
I wonder which of them doesn't want to join the team. Hope they will change their minds.
Will any of them tell their friends or family about WADDLES? Even if they don't I could see some like K finding out on their own. Though in K's case she will probably be both worried for her kids but very proud at the same time. Since their in a way following in her footsteps.
Forgot to mention this before the last time we talked. But I do like the name you choose for the group. It probably wasn't easy thinking of a good acronym with Waddles name. So you deserve major props for that.
I'm looking forward to seeing what kind of missions and adventures they will go on. I'm guessing unlike most of you're other stories. Where the characters we're on one main adventure/mission, this story will be having the characters going on multiple adventures/missions. Am I right or wrong?
What new enemies and allies will they make? What other crossovers will get involved? I'm eager to find out. :)
2/24/2016 c3 Jonesy
Dude... they took it better than I expected and yeah stereotypes funny!
I expected someone to say "does anyone else see a pig typing over there"or marco to say "eh(shrugs) living with star I've seen weirder, heck she made a pig that flies and talks that now lives in her room along with other strange creatures and things she made" or dipper to say "what am hoping to tell mabel you her best friend".
Waddles should show them clips about them to showcase their skills. Marco karating monsters with star and going throw other dimensions and Janna being being her weird self. Edgar and Ellen doing pranks along inventing and making gardens. Fillmore and Ingrid doing safty patrol and taking in and zim showing their creepy history. Riley and Todd on their phones replacing and biffy being spy-like with both brains and Brawn's they both have and working so well together under the pressure in solving the prank battling with monsters with Mabel and pacifica doing her thang.
Biffy makes everyone know he'll beat them up if necessary.
Marco and Janna most likely to go since they didn't appear in the HQ saying they want to be there besides without marco, star would burn the town with rainbows and puppies.
Edgar and Ellen don't like the safety people. Like natural law maybe.
Pacifica complains about only being well-off instead of being incredibly wealthy with one pony. Everyone blank stare at her.
Waddles should show everyone bill cipher on his holograms being mixed reactions.
Zim didn't you know aliens already have invaded earth before the ultralinks(max steel), crystal gems(Steven universe),star technically did(svtfoe), the experiments(lilo and stitch),wordgirl, jenny or xj9's villains , gravity falls' aircraft did crash there,atomic Betty's underground HQ, and your other stories .
Superheroes are mentioned and the story's villain name is given.
The mixed races and colors and ages seem they might clash.
Villains should never know about dimensional scissors.
Marco probably could beat up biffy since he did beat monsters bigger than him.
Dude... they took it better than I expected and yeah stereotypes funny!
I expected someone to say "does anyone else see a pig typing over there"or marco to say "eh(shrugs) living with star I've seen weirder, heck she made a pig that flies and talks that now lives in her room along with other strange creatures and things she made" or dipper to say "what am hoping to tell mabel you her best friend".
Waddles should show them clips about them to showcase their skills. Marco karating monsters with star and going throw other dimensions and Janna being being her weird self. Edgar and Ellen doing pranks along inventing and making gardens. Fillmore and Ingrid doing safty patrol and taking in and zim showing their creepy history. Riley and Todd on their phones replacing and biffy being spy-like with both brains and Brawn's they both have and working so well together under the pressure in solving the prank battling with monsters with Mabel and pacifica doing her thang.
Biffy makes everyone know he'll beat them up if necessary.
Marco and Janna most likely to go since they didn't appear in the HQ saying they want to be there besides without marco, star would burn the town with rainbows and puppies.
Edgar and Ellen don't like the safety people. Like natural law maybe.
Pacifica complains about only being well-off instead of being incredibly wealthy with one pony. Everyone blank stare at her.
Waddles should show everyone bill cipher on his holograms being mixed reactions.
Zim didn't you know aliens already have invaded earth before the ultralinks(max steel), crystal gems(Steven universe),star technically did(svtfoe), the experiments(lilo and stitch),wordgirl, jenny or xj9's villains , gravity falls' aircraft did crash there,atomic Betty's underground HQ, and your other stories .
Superheroes are mentioned and the story's villain name is given.
The mixed races and colors and ages seem they might clash.
Villains should never know about dimensional scissors.
Marco probably could beat up biffy since he did beat monsters bigger than him.
2/24/2016 c3 8The Keeper of Worlds
Wonder who that one is? Marco and Janna? That's a bit surprising if it is.
Wonder who that one is? Marco and Janna? That's a bit surprising if it is.
2/24/2016 c3 33LegionnaireBlaze
Ingrid and Fillmore. Most definitely, probably. Waddles is absolutely adorable, hyper-intelligent or not, he's just too cute! :) And this was hilarious, each part was funny, my favorite part was the conversation between Biffy and Waddles.
Ingrid and Fillmore. Most definitely, probably. Waddles is absolutely adorable, hyper-intelligent or not, he's just too cute! :) And this was hilarious, each part was funny, my favorite part was the conversation between Biffy and Waddles.
2/21/2016 c2 47Alisi Thorndyke
Ok question, Mordecai. Would that be a downplayed version of Mabel's future husband King Mordecai of the Star Dimension? Just curious :)
Well, I can't wait to see how chapter 3 goes :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
Ok question, Mordecai. Would that be a downplayed version of Mabel's future husband King Mordecai of the Star Dimension? Just curious :)
Well, I can't wait to see how chapter 3 goes :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
2/21/2016 c1 Alisi Thorndyke
I know Dipcifica is surely going to be in this and Todd with his sister Riley? :) Oh this is going to be good. :)
In the later eps of the Replacements, I loved how crazy Agent K got :D
Moving on to chapter 2 and the final chapter of fight for the code will be up this morning. :) Be sure to read the end note :D
Alisi Thorndyke :)
I know Dipcifica is surely going to be in this and Todd with his sister Riley? :) Oh this is going to be good. :)
In the later eps of the Replacements, I loved how crazy Agent K got :D
Moving on to chapter 2 and the final chapter of fight for the code will be up this morning. :) Be sure to read the end note :D
Alisi Thorndyke :)
2/20/2016 c2 Guest
Five out of seven. Not bad. And your decision of Fillmore and the Replacements are even more logical than my other two choices. Do we have a telepathic link? (X Files theme music plays)
Five out of seven. Not bad. And your decision of Fillmore and the Replacements are even more logical than my other two choices. Do we have a telepathic link? (X Files theme music plays)
2/16/2016 c2 1Araitsume
I am so glad that Detentionaire made the cut and that the rest of the teams are from shows of which I am already familiar. Also, this plan just has made it clear that Waddles is a supreme genius considering that it could've gone wrong at so many points. At last, the chosen are all in one train carriage/coach; let the clashes begin!
I am so glad that Detentionaire made the cut and that the rest of the teams are from shows of which I am already familiar. Also, this plan just has made it clear that Waddles is a supreme genius considering that it could've gone wrong at so many points. At last, the chosen are all in one train carriage/coach; let the clashes begin!
2/15/2016 c2 nightmaster000
Great chapter love the characters that won the poll. Though to be honest Iiked all the choices that we're on the poll.
I'm looking forward to seeing how the react to Waddles, and their thoughts on the situation.
I'm guessing some characters might take time to think about the offer. I look to seeing how they will all interact, and what they will think of each other.
Great chapter love the characters that won the poll. Though to be honest Iiked all the choices that we're on the poll.
I'm looking forward to seeing how the react to Waddles, and their thoughts on the situation.
I'm guessing some characters might take time to think about the offer. I look to seeing how they will all interact, and what they will think of each other.