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for The Other Side - RATED M

3/8/2018 c1 9alwaysdoubted
Hey, absolutely nothing wrong with a little lemon writing. Don't be ashamed. I loved what you wrote here as well. Another nice piece of work from you.
6/26/2016 c1 Scorpiess
It was a pretty good story I enjoyed reading it.
3/22/2016 c1 2Blu-Jay McKray
I've read your other stories (which I need to reread and comment on) and I must say...yeah that cold shower is in order. I do like the fact that this was kept separate from the main story, as other readers might not be a fan of lemon fics. I think this is a good format to do in the future if the main stories are not in that Rated M category. Keep up the awesome work!
2/29/2016 c1 review lord
Yay so we did get a lemon for that awesome, still great story OFF TO THE SEQUEL!
2/7/2016 c1 32RyokoMist
Well I already left you a review but I just want to say again that for your first lemon you did great! I know how scary and uncomfortable it can be when writing out of our comfort zone, but I think you nailed it! Also, Basem and Sally need to hook up already! If I cant have him, I'll at least let Sally take him for a ride (NO PUN INTENDED). That girl is so sassy I'm willing to allow it! Now, take that cold shower. Maybe soak in some ice cubes XD
2/6/2016 c1 jtdarkman
Lol pure euphoria. Lol I love it. I'm really liking this basem Sally connect do I smell another denied couple hmmmm
2/6/2016 c1 20Watership's Nightwish Rat
Well, you did warn us, so I can't complain about what I just read...
I didn't find this nearly as graphic or disturbing as other things I've come across. I'm glad these two found... pleasure, though it doesn't make me want to be unvirgined any time soon. XD
Sorry if that was weird...
Anyway, good one-shot!

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