for High School DxD: The Divine Magical Rider7/18/2018 c10 Awayuki
How long would it take for next update, is this story dead. oh dear author thou please answer this reader question
How long would it take for next update, is this story dead. oh dear author thou please answer this reader question
1/11/2018 c1 Guest
It seems cool,but you should add a harem,this mc deserves it.
It seems cool,but you should add a harem,this mc deserves it.
6/30/2017 c9 Celestial stratos
I think this is a great story but your oc wanting to help everyone despite knowing he could die is kind of irritating it sounds to much like shirou from fate stay night.
I think this is a great story but your oc wanting to help everyone despite knowing he could die is kind of irritating it sounds to much like shirou from fate stay night.
6/24/2017 c10 pale rider 17
this chapter is Epic and i Think that takeshi and kiyome have got closer to one Another because they
dont want to se one of them get hurt or end upp deed. and they had a cute moment when they hugged each other so yeah that is how i react so i hope to read Another chapter .
this chapter is Epic and i Think that takeshi and kiyome have got closer to one Another because they
dont want to se one of them get hurt or end upp deed. and they had a cute moment when they hugged each other so yeah that is how i react so i hope to read Another chapter .
6/23/2017 c10 Mariah
This is great but when are you gonna update High School DXD: The Zero (rewrite) story. It's been a year since the last time you updated that story.
This is great but when are you gonna update High School DXD: The Zero (rewrite) story. It's been a year since the last time you updated that story.
6/25/2017 c10 Awayuki
you know author-san this is one of the good oc story i ever read in highschool dxd fanfic i do hope you continue this story~ if you dont mind can i pm you to ask some advice and opinion about writing
you know author-san this is one of the good oc story i ever read in highschool dxd fanfic i do hope you continue this story~ if you dont mind can i pm you to ask some advice and opinion about writing
6/25/2017 c10 ShadowUzumaki55
I was worried that you had given up on writing fics. Awesome job as usual.
Takeshi has a strong sense of justice, and with the help of his friends they managed to save the town. Wonder what this means for him now. I'd say that he has earned a long vacation. And, summer break is coming up he should take full advantage of his time off and gets some rest and relaxation.
For Blair, I had thought that she was Kuroka at first.
Anyway keep up the good work.
I was worried that you had given up on writing fics. Awesome job as usual.
Takeshi has a strong sense of justice, and with the help of his friends they managed to save the town. Wonder what this means for him now. I'd say that he has earned a long vacation. And, summer break is coming up he should take full advantage of his time off and gets some rest and relaxation.
For Blair, I had thought that she was Kuroka at first.
Anyway keep up the good work.
16/23/2017 c10 MrSpice
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! MAKES ME PUMPED FOR THE NEXT ONE!
I WANT TO READ THE TREATY CHAPTER! now! I want to see what you do with it!
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! MAKES ME PUMPED FOR THE NEXT ONE!
I WANT TO READ THE TREATY CHAPTER! now! I want to see what you do with it!
5/25/2017 c9 pale archer 17
takeshi has strong sense off justice and have a good heart
and i Think that maybe If possible kiyome and takeshi can be together considering that
Those are childhood friends If that make sense ?
ps: this are my first opinion so i understand If others have different idea.
takeshi has strong sense off justice and have a good heart
and i Think that maybe If possible kiyome and takeshi can be together considering that
Those are childhood friends If that make sense ?
ps: this are my first opinion so i understand If others have different idea.
3/30/2017 c9 Guest
Neat!
Neat!
12/30/2016 c9 Klein
Nice chap. harem- Yes,harem - wise: Sona,Yukina,Kiyome,...,...,...,...,...,...,
Nice chap. harem- Yes,harem - wise: Sona,Yukina,Kiyome,...,...,...,...,...,...,