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1Ultimatrix bearer
Sorry for the misunderstanding I thought Raven was actually going through with the demands.*still mad she would kidnap her teammates daughter without hesitation* How the heck did neo kill the spring maiden!? I honestly liked that twist but I need an explanation or a fight scene to believe it, I mean Amber was clearly to much for neo or cinder alone,and it's safe to assume the spring maiden was of a comparable level.
And Natsu ...so many questions! But seriously you've officially earned the title of BOSS!
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
1Ultimatrix bearerSorry for the misunderstanding I thought Raven was actually going through with the demands.*still mad she would kidnap her teammates daughter without hesitation* How the heck did neo kill the spring maiden!? I honestly liked that twist but I need an explanation or a fight scene to believe it, I mean Amber was clearly to much for neo or cinder alone,and it's safe to assume the spring maiden was of a comparable level.
And Natsu ...so many questions! But seriously you've officially earned the title of BOSS!
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
3/18/2017 c34 3topaz3
Oh come on! Why the hell would you make this!? I don't want Neo to become invincible! I'm not faving this.
3topaz3Oh come on! Why the hell would you make this!? I don't want Neo to become invincible! I'm not faving this.
3/18/2017 c34 Emiliano733
Hello, the chapter is great, very good fight and your changes seems properly(poor Raoul, i really hope Ilia will die slowly and painful). I agree with you, the biggest problem of this volume was the lack of action and a little diminuition of standard, but i really enjoyed the Geist,the sea dragon and Tyrian...let's just hope thath Rt will make assumption of the critiques and will do better fights. Well, good work and waiting, maybe we will see again before fall.
P.s. whath do you think about Lionheart? Frankly i think thath his betrayal can be connected with Summer's death, and maybe even Ironwood's scar.
Hello, the chapter is great, very good fight and your changes seems properly(poor Raoul, i really hope Ilia will die slowly and painful). I agree with you, the biggest problem of this volume was the lack of action and a little diminuition of standard, but i really enjoyed the Geist,the sea dragon and Tyrian...let's just hope thath Rt will make assumption of the critiques and will do better fights. Well, good work and waiting, maybe we will see again before fall.
P.s. whath do you think about Lionheart? Frankly i think thath his betrayal can be connected with Summer's death, and maybe even Ironwood's scar.
3/18/2017 c34 214Shadow Joestar
KO awesome chapter, two epic battles broke out and our heroes survive them all and Yang got to see what happen to Natsu and will do what she can to help him.
214Shadow JoestarKO awesome chapter, two epic battles broke out and our heroes survive them all and Yang got to see what happen to Natsu and will do what she can to help him.
3/14/2017 c33 Guest
But Raven has ONE OF THE MAIDENS in her Tribe, Salem will come after the Maiden EVENTUALLY! Raven HAS TO REALIZE THIS, right!?
But Raven has ONE OF THE MAIDENS in her Tribe, Salem will come after the Maiden EVENTUALLY! Raven HAS TO REALIZE THIS, right!?
3/14/2017 c33 Emiliano733
Hello, very good chapter by the beginning to the end and even the fight with Ilia is better(but a little of action more wouldn't be bad or Sage thath resisted to the attack) and i can't wait to see whath you will do after volume 4, a filler saga for show more your character or what?
P.s. Sell the life of your best friend's daughter for thath of a bunch of bandits thath care only for themselves? Raven is really a stupid bitch and for me she deserves only to be eaten alive(and/or maybe raped) by a LAAARGE pack of Ursa. Ahhh, let's hope thath in volume 5 will be finally some flashback on team strq.
Hello, very good chapter by the beginning to the end and even the fight with Ilia is better(but a little of action more wouldn't be bad or Sage thath resisted to the attack) and i can't wait to see whath you will do after volume 4, a filler saga for show more your character or what?
P.s. Sell the life of your best friend's daughter for thath of a bunch of bandits thath care only for themselves? Raven is really a stupid bitch and for me she deserves only to be eaten alive(and/or maybe raped) by a LAAARGE pack of Ursa. Ahhh, let's hope thath in volume 5 will be finally some flashback on team strq.
3/14/2017 c33 1Ultimatrix bearer
Weiss can't teach people to summon, her semblance is hereditary. Other than that GREAT JOB!...even if you made me like Raven less.( COME ON SHE'S NOT SO NAÏVE TO BELIEVE SALEM WILL KEEP HER WORD! NOT TO MENTION POSSIBLY HANDING OVER A TACTICAL ADVANTAGE!) *breath* OK sorry about that,let the RWBY fan in me loose.
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
1Ultimatrix bearerWeiss can't teach people to summon, her semblance is hereditary. Other than that GREAT JOB!...even if you made me like Raven less.( COME ON SHE'S NOT SO NAÏVE TO BELIEVE SALEM WILL KEEP HER WORD! NOT TO MENTION POSSIBLY HANDING OVER A TACTICAL ADVANTAGE!) *breath* OK sorry about that,let the RWBY fan in me loose.
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
3/14/2017 c33 10Grimlock987
NO WAY IN HELL AM I GOING TO LET RAVEN KIDNAP RUBY AND IF SHE TRYS (voice goes demonic) SHE WILL HAVE TO A DEATH SO BLOOBY, HER BLOOD WILL BE USED AS INK, HER SPINAl CORD CARVED INTO A SWORD, AND HER HEAD MOUNTED ON A PIKE! FEAR ME
10Grimlock987NO WAY IN HELL AM I GOING TO LET RAVEN KIDNAP RUBY AND IF SHE TRYS (voice goes demonic) SHE WILL HAVE TO A DEATH SO BLOOBY, HER BLOOD WILL BE USED AS INK, HER SPINAl CORD CARVED INTO A SWORD, AND HER HEAD MOUNTED ON A PIKE! FEAR ME
3/14/2017 c33 214Shadow Joestar
KO awesome chapter, I knew Satsuki was hurting herself on the inside and a mother's love helped her realize that. Everyone has spilt up to see meet up but maybe sooner than they thought with an unexpected guess coming. Raven doesn't try to upset her daughter or make things worse for herself.
214Shadow JoestarKO awesome chapter, I knew Satsuki was hurting herself on the inside and a mother's love helped her realize that. Everyone has spilt up to see meet up but maybe sooner than they thought with an unexpected guess coming. Raven doesn't try to upset her daughter or make things worse for herself.
3/5/2017 c13 Guest
Will we find out more on Natsu's past in the next chapter?
Will we find out more on Natsu's past in the next chapter?
3/4/2017 c32 Guest
Will Aerith be able to heal Qrow!?
Will Aerith be able to heal Qrow!?
3/4/2017 c32 Emiliano733
Hello again, wow, this was really a hell of fight. I'm really curious to see whath will happen now(since probably Qrow will tell them even more on Natsu),and please...make thath crap of fight beetween Sun and Ilia a REAL BATTLE(really, how the heck a finalist in the tournaument can be defetead so easily?!)!
P.s. I really hope Vergil and Adam will continues early their fight, even if for the canon series i hope for a LONG series of battles beetween Adam and Sun.
Hello again, wow, this was really a hell of fight. I'm really curious to see whath will happen now(since probably Qrow will tell them even more on Natsu),and please...make thath crap of fight beetween Sun and Ilia a REAL BATTLE(really, how the heck a finalist in the tournaument can be defetead so easily?!)!
P.s. I really hope Vergil and Adam will continues early their fight, even if for the canon series i hope for a LONG series of battles beetween Adam and Sun.
3/4/2017 c32 1Ultimatrix bearer
I personally preferred tyrian's original dialogue but you did great. You can always make a spider or snake faunus.
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
1Ultimatrix bearerI personally preferred tyrian's original dialogue but you did great. You can always make a spider or snake faunus.
KEEP BEING AWESOME!