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216Shadow Joestar
KO awesome chapter, despite Raven trying to get Yang to forget about Natsu it didn't work, she still loves him. Blake and friends arrived at her homeland but danger is a upon them.
216Shadow JoestarKO awesome chapter, despite Raven trying to get Yang to forget about Natsu it didn't work, she still loves him. Blake and friends arrived at her homeland but danger is a upon them.
2/7/2017 c30 Emiliano733
Fantastic chapter, you made Raven absolutely perfect(in fact she reminds me a little of Esdeath, but Raven seems me a little more complex), seriously, she scares me if possible even more than canon and than Salem himself! I liked also the discussion beetween Tayang and Glynda, i hope thath the will reconcile and thath Yang will sobers Natsu with many, many punches. And i can't wait to see who are Tyrian's partner and whath are those reds mark. But aniway, Ichabod and Nuckelavee are differents Grimms, right?
Fantastic chapter, you made Raven absolutely perfect(in fact she reminds me a little of Esdeath, but Raven seems me a little more complex), seriously, she scares me if possible even more than canon and than Salem himself! I liked also the discussion beetween Tayang and Glynda, i hope thath the will reconcile and thath Yang will sobers Natsu with many, many punches. And i can't wait to see who are Tyrian's partner and whath are those reds mark. But aniway, Ichabod and Nuckelavee are differents Grimms, right?
2/4/2017 c2 xNaruHina
Wayyyy to many different cross over elements... like seriously man? Also, it is quite disappointing that Natsu wasn't partnered with Yang. :/
Wayyyy to many different cross over elements... like seriously man? Also, it is quite disappointing that Natsu wasn't partnered with Yang. :/
2/4/2017 c1 xNaruHina
It doesn't seem like Natsu to just abandon someone who needs a friend... Why did you make him so callous?
It doesn't seem like Natsu to just abandon someone who needs a friend... Why did you make him so callous?
2/2/2017 c29 Rebounder1904
Wait, is natsu now a bad guy permanently for the rest pf the story or will he be swayed back to the side of good, because i like the sound of the second option better. Really though, will he become good again or stay bad
Wait, is natsu now a bad guy permanently for the rest pf the story or will he be swayed back to the side of good, because i like the sound of the second option better. Really though, will he become good again or stay bad
1/24/2017 c29 4sparkydragon98
This was a really good chapter! It was nice to see how you diverged from canon. I liked the fight against the Leviathan with Yasha added in. As for Sage, I think he should get dog ears. Cool battle between Roman and the teachers, and I wasn't expecting to see the Spring Maiden. I'm pretty sure Natsu's tail will grow back. It was nice to see Raven, too. Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.S.- I think Captain Nemo is from 20,000 Leagues Under The Sea. I'm not 100% sure though as I haven't read the book, but that's my guess.
4sparkydragon98This was a really good chapter! It was nice to see how you diverged from canon. I liked the fight against the Leviathan with Yasha added in. As for Sage, I think he should get dog ears. Cool battle between Roman and the teachers, and I wasn't expecting to see the Spring Maiden. I'm pretty sure Natsu's tail will grow back. It was nice to see Raven, too. Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.S.- I think Captain Nemo is from 20,000 Leagues Under The Sea. I'm not 100% sure though as I haven't read the book, but that's my guess.
1/22/2017 c29 Guest
Is Hina the CANON Spring Maiden!?
Is Hina the CANON Spring Maiden!?
1/23/2017 c29 Emiliano733
Very good chapter, beatiful fights and rights changes( but i hope thath the villa in won't overpower too many opponents how on the train), i hope thath glynda will obtain a little revenge on roman later and for sage i reccomend pig ears.
P.s. please, don't make salem the first winter maiden o even worst summer rose, i hate those theories with all my heart.
Very good chapter, beatiful fights and rights changes( but i hope thath the villa in won't overpower too many opponents how on the train), i hope thath glynda will obtain a little revenge on roman later and for sage i reccomend pig ears.
P.s. please, don't make salem the first winter maiden o even worst summer rose, i hate those theories with all my heart.
1/23/2017 c29 216Shadow Joestar
KO awesome chapter, seems even the demonic Natsu isn't quite a match for Raven when he fought against her and Sun with Yasha are preparing to join Blake on a journey home to sort things out.
216Shadow JoestarKO awesome chapter, seems even the demonic Natsu isn't quite a match for Raven when he fought against her and Sun with Yasha are preparing to join Blake on a journey home to sort things out.
1/22/2017 c29 GiantSpidr
can you give sage bunny eat. why? because it would be hilarious imagining sage with bunny ears.
can you give sage bunny eat. why? because it would be hilarious imagining sage with bunny ears.
1/22/2017 c29 5MAJORMATT1234
Great Chapter. I really love the Natsu scenes the most. Hope to see Yang and the group run into him at one point
5MAJORMATT1234Great Chapter. I really love the Natsu scenes the most. Hope to see Yang and the group run into him at one point
1/17/2017 c28 1Dragon Lord Draco
Maybe we didn't notice the references because we didn't know how to pronounce them
Well written
1Dragon Lord DracoMaybe we didn't notice the references because we didn't know how to pronounce them
Well written