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Damn...I wasn't expecting that...poor Neo though. I feel kinda bad for her despite what she's already done so far.
Damn...I wasn't expecting that...poor Neo though. I feel kinda bad for her despite what she's already done so far.
7/24/2021 c49 
6MajorBrony95
Glad to see a new chapter. I'm impressed with how you wrote this one, though I am a little disappointed that we never got to see Natsu and Yang at the club (a lot of stories like this seem to gloss over those parts to focus on the Ruby bit.) I'm planning on including that in my own fiction, JSPR (take a look and see what you think.) Meanwhile, the role switch for Ren and Nora with Ryuko and Virgil was intriguing. Can't wait to see what happens next. Also, good bit with the no blood on Penny's swords. Many miss that.
6MajorBrony95Glad to see a new chapter. I'm impressed with how you wrote this one, though I am a little disappointed that we never got to see Natsu and Yang at the club (a lot of stories like this seem to gloss over those parts to focus on the Ruby bit.) I'm planning on including that in my own fiction, JSPR (take a look and see what you think.) Meanwhile, the role switch for Ren and Nora with Ryuko and Virgil was intriguing. Can't wait to see what happens next. Also, good bit with the no blood on Penny's swords. Many miss that.
7/24/2021 c49 167Shadow Joestar
KO awesome chapter, the election didn’t go well for everyone and now things are getting intense even for the heroes though hopefully things will work out before it gets worse.
167Shadow JoestarKO awesome chapter, the election didn’t go well for everyone and now things are getting intense even for the heroes though hopefully things will work out before it gets worse.
4/24/2021 c48 6MajorBrony95
So glad to finally see another chapter! Everything seems to be going okay for the heroes, but we all know things aren't always what they seem . Kinda funny how Grey gave the crossing-guard job to Natsu . He'd DEFINITELY do that in here or in Fairy Tail. At least our fav Faunus has his girl for company. Though both he and our Spring Maiden are unsure of a few things after meeting Johanna and their talk with Winter. Plus, interesting choice of the two learning about Fria instead of Weiss. Wonder if they'll tell the others or not. I admit that keeping Fria locked up like that isn't too great. Keeping her safe sure, but that's not entirely what Ironwood has planned.
Take your time, but hope to see a new chapter eventually.
BTW, the fic I kept mentioning in comments here is finally up: "JSPR: Volume 1." Give it a look if and when you have the time .
6MajorBrony95So glad to finally see another chapter! Everything seems to be going okay for the heroes, but we all know things aren't always what they seem . Kinda funny how Grey gave the crossing-guard job to Natsu . He'd DEFINITELY do that in here or in Fairy Tail. At least our fav Faunus has his girl for company. Though both he and our Spring Maiden are unsure of a few things after meeting Johanna and their talk with Winter. Plus, interesting choice of the two learning about Fria instead of Weiss. Wonder if they'll tell the others or not. I admit that keeping Fria locked up like that isn't too great. Keeping her safe sure, but that's not entirely what Ironwood has planned.
Take your time, but hope to see a new chapter eventually.
BTW, the fic I kept mentioning in comments here is finally up: "JSPR: Volume 1." Give it a look if and when you have the time .
4/24/2021 c48 167Shadow Joestar
KO awesome chapter, well at least Natsu and the others are doing well during their time in Atlas though there still some small intense and now they’ll have to deal with what’s going with the election.
167Shadow JoestarKO awesome chapter, well at least Natsu and the others are doing well during their time in Atlas though there still some small intense and now they’ll have to deal with what’s going with the election.
4/17/2021 c31 twilightnite13
I can't believe you turned Satsuki into a.. typical high class bigot instead of siding with her family. This is a very interesting chapter by the way. please keep up the great work.
I can't believe you turned Satsuki into a.. typical high class bigot instead of siding with her family. This is a very interesting chapter by the way. please keep up the great work.
4/17/2021 c16 twilightnite13
*Gets a shot gun and said, sneaking up to an unsuspecting CRDL* "Be very very quiet, I'm hunting bigots." *Before jumping in with all kinds of weapons to make the four of them suffer.*
*Gets a shot gun and said, sneaking up to an unsuspecting CRDL* "Be very very quiet, I'm hunting bigots." *Before jumping in with all kinds of weapons to make the four of them suffer.*
1/20/2021 c47 6MajorBrony95
Sorry again about the confusion around Christmas with the message. I thought you'd recognize me .
Anyway, a little late, but great chapter. Was surprised by the change up in the Ops, but should be interesting, especially with Grey being a part of them (maybe could be the Harriet of the group.) Plus, the part with Penny was very interesting and you make something of a valid point with the memory loss. Unsure if I would do it, but you add a good addition of fluff factor with Penny becoming friends with Ruby all over again . Man, how do you think of outfits!? For that matter, how does RT!? I'm often boggled on what to give the characters.
Anyway, can't wait for the next one.
6MajorBrony95Sorry again about the confusion around Christmas with the message. I thought you'd recognize me .
Anyway, a little late, but great chapter. Was surprised by the change up in the Ops, but should be interesting, especially with Grey being a part of them (maybe could be the Harriet of the group.) Plus, the part with Penny was very interesting and you make something of a valid point with the memory loss. Unsure if I would do it, but you add a good addition of fluff factor with Penny becoming friends with Ruby all over again . Man, how do you think of outfits!? For that matter, how does RT!? I'm often boggled on what to give the characters.
Anyway, can't wait for the next one.