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6MajorBrony95
Very nice. I was wondering how you would do this scene. Can't wait for the finale and Vol. 7 of this.
6MajorBrony95Very nice. I was wondering how you would do this scene. Can't wait for the finale and Vol. 7 of this.
8/29/2020 c44 214Shadow Joestar
KO awesome chapter, damn the city is in trouble with the Grimm attacking and hope Natsu and friends will be able to deal with. Nice to see Yang using the Spring Maiden’s power against Adam and kept him alive which is a little understandable that death is too good for him.
214Shadow JoestarKO awesome chapter, damn the city is in trouble with the Grimm attacking and hope Natsu and friends will be able to deal with. Nice to see Yang using the Spring Maiden’s power against Adam and kept him alive which is a little understandable that death is too good for him.
6/22/2020 c6 Gamma-X
Wait, 2016? Didn't we already know that Blake's dad was the leader of the White Fang at this point?
Also, is it just me, or is Natsu and his group just tagalongs to the main cast in this story? Meaning they have absolutely no effect whatsoever in the plot despite their involvement? If so, why are they there?
Wait, 2016? Didn't we already know that Blake's dad was the leader of the White Fang at this point?
Also, is it just me, or is Natsu and his group just tagalongs to the main cast in this story? Meaning they have absolutely no effect whatsoever in the plot despite their involvement? If so, why are they there?
6/22/2020 c5 Gamma-X
You wrote "Completion:" but you meant to write "Complexion:"
Just letting ya know. Nice trailer. Rather short though.
You wrote "Completion:" but you meant to write "Complexion:"
Just letting ya know. Nice trailer. Rather short though.
6/22/2020 c4 Gamma-X
Oooh! Natsu and Velvet are friends?! YES! Although..I can't get my hopes up since the pairing says Natsu x Yang... *cries in the corner*
But, this was outstanding interaction between Natsu and Velvet, I quite love it. I hope to see more, and more of Ryuko-chan. It's a shame this ain't a harem, single solid pairings make things so hard but so nice! x'c
Ja Ne~!
Oooh! Natsu and Velvet are friends?! YES! Although..I can't get my hopes up since the pairing says Natsu x Yang... *cries in the corner*
But, this was outstanding interaction between Natsu and Velvet, I quite love it. I hope to see more, and more of Ryuko-chan. It's a shame this ain't a harem, single solid pairings make things so hard but so nice! x'c
Ja Ne~!
6/21/2020 c3 Gamma-X
Team Never? What color is Never? did you forget about the Color Rule in RWBY? Every name *must* have a relation to a color. Or does Never have a relation to Gray or something?
Also, Natsu x Yang? I mean, I love Yang since she's funny as hell, but I was hoping for Velvet, cuz she doesn't have enough to fics. Is like no one likes our resident chocolate bunny. xC (#LizardXBunny)
Though, I don't have a problem with Yang, just something I wanted to say.
I wonder how Natsu will react to Cardinal bullying Velvet...or will he be the one bullied since he's got way more traits than any other Faunus? Hmm..
Ja Ne~!
Team Never? What color is Never? did you forget about the Color Rule in RWBY? Every name *must* have a relation to a color. Or does Never have a relation to Gray or something?
Also, Natsu x Yang? I mean, I love Yang since she's funny as hell, but I was hoping for Velvet, cuz she doesn't have enough to fics. Is like no one likes our resident chocolate bunny. xC (#LizardXBunny)
Though, I don't have a problem with Yang, just something I wanted to say.
I wonder how Natsu will react to Cardinal bullying Velvet...or will he be the one bullied since he's got way more traits than any other Faunus? Hmm..
Ja Ne~!
6/21/2020 c2 Gamma-X
I KNEW it was Ryuuko when i saw the character had the Scissors, next to having a red strand of hair! Also, you wrote "Rin" instead of "Ren" multiple times this chapter. And, you misquoted Ruby, what she actually said was "But you don't even know me..." You forgot the "But" and "me" part.
Anyways, this seems fun, though I don't understand why you keep writing scenes that we already know and have already seen in the animated series in every one of your fics, since it's a bit annoying when nothing changed whatsoever between the fic and show usually. Though, I'd assume it's for people who haven't seen the series, or it just helps your flow with writing better to make them seem like actual official stories?
But anyway...
Ja Ne~!
I KNEW it was Ryuuko when i saw the character had the Scissors, next to having a red strand of hair! Also, you wrote "Rin" instead of "Ren" multiple times this chapter. And, you misquoted Ruby, what she actually said was "But you don't even know me..." You forgot the "But" and "me" part.
Anyways, this seems fun, though I don't understand why you keep writing scenes that we already know and have already seen in the animated series in every one of your fics, since it's a bit annoying when nothing changed whatsoever between the fic and show usually. Though, I'd assume it's for people who haven't seen the series, or it just helps your flow with writing better to make them seem like actual official stories?
But anyway...
Ja Ne~!
6/21/2020 c1 Gamma-X
"Well, its about a man with two souls, both fighting for control over the body." ...I just realized, was that book talking about Ozpin and was hidden spoiler?
Also, why does Natsu have multiples Faunus traits? (Eyes, Fangs, scales, claws, tail, etc.) I thought they could only have 1 or 2? And what does NVAR stand for? Never?
#MontyWasAGreatMan
"Well, its about a man with two souls, both fighting for control over the body." ...I just realized, was that book talking about Ozpin and was hidden spoiler?
Also, why does Natsu have multiples Faunus traits? (Eyes, Fangs, scales, claws, tail, etc.) I thought they could only have 1 or 2? And what does NVAR stand for? Never?
#MontyWasAGreatMan
6/17/2020 c43 Guest
How did a scuffle between the Gods of Light and Darkness come up in Jinn’s vision in canon!?
How did a scuffle between the Gods of Light and Darkness come up in Jinn’s vision in canon!?
6/17/2020 c43 Guest
At least have Ironwood’s reply “Tear Cordovin a New One”! How come you only had the one guard at the base rather than the two identical stooges!
At least have Ironwood’s reply “Tear Cordovin a New One”! How come you only had the one guard at the base rather than the two identical stooges!
6/17/2020 c43 Guest
Did Saphron and her wife adopt their child!?
Did Saphron and her wife adopt their child!?