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1/18/2020 c41 Demidragon
For the most part leave the fairy tale out. It was literally just an episode of exposition and a chapter of it seems excessive. However if there are different details that pertain to any new information or future plot then include the tale.
1/18/2020 c41 keybladelight
Now is finally time for vol 6 and i hope natsu is re awaken but light god igneel does this mean natsu i his a half god half human in your story.
1/18/2020 c41 174Shadow Joestar
KO awesome chapter, the gang are about to find out the truth about Ozpin and Salem that will shock them for life or Yang causing a major storm to have a lightning bolt strike him though that would also hit Oscar too.
1/18/2020 c41 Guest
Please skip that Fairy Tale. Everyone should already know what happened. You could instead do something that Natsu breaks this control for good. Something like he spoke with Igneel in the final chapter. Maybe instead with the God of Light. He could tell about the ancient past too.
1/18/2020 c41 2merendinoemiliano
Pretty badass battle, can't wait to see if something will change in Salem's backstory. Good work.
12/23/2019 c40 Guest
How did pressing a button free Natsu!? I am so confused!
12/23/2019 c40 Guest
But Natsu has to live with the fact that he burned Pyrrha to ashes, Jaune surely hasn’t forgotten that!
12/22/2019 c40 1Ultimatrix bearer
Maiden yang? Interesting.

So glad there is no stupidity for the sake of the plot.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!
12/21/2019 c40 1R.A.B. Entertainment Inc
Good chapter, I wonder how Roman will react when Neo got murdered from Cinder though?
12/21/2019 c40 keybladelight
The story was good and natsu as return to is friend hope to see vol 6.
12/21/2019 c40 2merendinoemiliano
Pretty badass fight, i'm glad to see you're working more on changing the story(trough i've seen some story where Yang is a Maiden) curious to see what they will do with Raven, hoping they will remember what she has done for seventeen years. Good work, merry Christmas and happy new year.
12/21/2019 c40 174Shadow Joestar
KO awesome chapter, Haven is safe and Cinder is finally defeated though not for long I’m afraid as her team is defeated too and Natsu is back with his friends! Things are starting to look up for the heroes.
12/21/2019 c40 1jesus
Great job.
12/1/2019 c34 1jesus
Very cool.
11/30/2019 c31 1jesus
Nicely done.
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