for Boy With a Scar9/24 c34 Ebasete
I am amazed by your story. By changing one personality the characters go on a different course then canon. You're great at keeping everyone in character too. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
I am amazed by your story. By changing one personality the characters go on a different course then canon. You're great at keeping everyone in character too. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
9/18 c34 Guest
Very nice story ! I love how you write everything, I hope you will put other chapters someday, that's one of the greatest one piece fanfiction I ever read !
(Sorry if my english is bad, I'm from France, so my english is not very good :)
Thank you for your wonderful story !
Very nice story ! I love how you write everything, I hope you will put other chapters someday, that's one of the greatest one piece fanfiction I ever read !
(Sorry if my english is bad, I'm from France, so my english is not very good :)
Thank you for your wonderful story !
9/14 c34 
1Har Cj
El primer fanfiction de one piece que he leído, has dejado el listón muy arriba 10/10
1Har CjEl primer fanfiction de one piece que he leído, has dejado el listón muy arriba 10/10
9/2 c34 FallenSage
Great job loved it thanks for all your hard work can’t wait to see what happens next
Great job loved it thanks for all your hard work can’t wait to see what happens next
8/25 c34 SomeGuy2020
This is great! With the next destination, Luffy will finally get the "fluffy one" that he always wanted. Which makes me wonder how interactions between Luffy and Chopper will go considering hes a doctor and that he will wanna do the best he can to treat Luffy. Also, i havent the slightest clue where youre going with Mr. 3 meeting up with Wapol, but it oughta make for some interesting confrontation. Cant wait for more!
This is great! With the next destination, Luffy will finally get the "fluffy one" that he always wanted. Which makes me wonder how interactions between Luffy and Chopper will go considering hes a doctor and that he will wanna do the best he can to treat Luffy. Also, i havent the slightest clue where youre going with Mr. 3 meeting up with Wapol, but it oughta make for some interesting confrontation. Cant wait for more!
8/25 c34 6Ragnarok Ascendant
Heh. I see some things are going to get *interesting*.
Good on Sabo for being the voice of reason but also AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
6Ragnarok AscendantHeh. I see some things are going to get *interesting*.
Good on Sabo for being the voice of reason but also AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
8/25 c34 1Ultimatrix bearer
Dang Luffy really just beat Vivi senseless with facts. lol
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
1Ultimatrix bearerDang Luffy really just beat Vivi senseless with facts. lol
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
8/25 c34 2Lycoan2109
nice chapter. Always good to see mature luffy this early in his adventure. His perspective is something you've got down to a T. its inspiring how well you write. Hope you don't end up killling Wapol as he's quite important for future with all Wapol Metal that Franky uses and With recent manga chapters.
2Lycoan2109nice chapter. Always good to see mature luffy this early in his adventure. His perspective is something you've got down to a T. its inspiring how well you write. Hope you don't end up killling Wapol as he's quite important for future with all Wapol Metal that Franky uses and With recent manga chapters.