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10/9/2019 c3 Rev
This is really nice! Zero x Mikan hmm

The way you conveyed the emotions. The way you write itself, it's very compelling. Hope you'll finish this. It's wonderful!
8/29/2019 c3 Anime100
This is truly interesting to read; please update very soon

I hope Mikan gives them the cold shoulder; they deserve it for hurting her
8/15/2019 c4 1Nicole aka The AnimeLover
After I finished chapter 3, so eager to continue reading on and then clicked on the next button to move to the next chapter, and it ended up being an authors update, i literally screamed NOOO lol I want to know what happens next, I need more xD
I really cant wait for your next update! Its so amazing!(:
3/15/2018 c3 VL x DL lover
wow really great I can't wait until the next one!
3/3/2018 c3 Guest
This is great! I would love to see Mikan finding others and make her former “friends” jealous! That would be awesome! But whatever you want.. that is just an idea! Keep up the great work!
1/9/2018 c3 DELEETEETHISACCOUNTTPLEEASE
AWWW POOR MIKAN I HOPE ONE DAY SHE BEATS ALL THEIR ASSES
12/31/2017 c4 Geneenja
Oof i totally understand being busy and i hope you get to update more. Happy new year and i wish you luck on the next following years.
4/22/2017 c3 11UnicornTalesLol
aw. please write more.
12/24/2016 c3 3MISUNDERSTOOD and FUCKED UP
please update. T-T
12/6/2016 c3 Guest
Update please!
9/30/2016 c3 Guest
Great, keep up the work can not wait for the next update
9/13/2016 c3 Aqua Fire Queen
Thank u for updating!

P. S. Is Sabi a female? I think it is since it would be strange to have a male voice in your head i female. Thx once again
9/5/2016 c1 Guest
Great Story! I hope you finish the next chapter of this story soon! (:
9/3/2016 c3 1Kimcub110
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
9/2/2016 c3 1Maeoki
You. Have. Saved. My. Life. From. Boredom!
I was soooo bored today, but you have lighten up my day! With a new chapter!
I can't wait till Mikan and Zero meet! My heart is thumping in excitement!
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