for Legend of Sun Knight Twelve destiny12/21/2017 c1 Suzululu4moe
Lol . Nice twist. Interesting combo. Though with both the new leaders like that... what a scary thought.
Lol . Nice twist. Interesting combo. Though with both the new leaders like that... what a scary thought.
11/24/2016 c4 Guest
More plsss
More plsss
6/18/2016 c4 Anonymous
Please update spellcast its been a really long time I'm still waiting for it
Please update spellcast its been a really long time I'm still waiting for it
5/23/2016 c2 ventisca24
A mi me parece interesante la historia y quiero que se desarrolle mas. Por favor sigue con ella.
Soy mala con los tÃtulos pero tal vez...
"Un mundo alterno"
A mi me parece interesante la historia y quiero que se desarrolle mas. Por favor sigue con ella.
Soy mala con los tÃtulos pero tal vez...
"Un mundo alterno"
5/2/2016 c1 Guest
Nice to see you writing again :P Aside from grammatical errors, this was an interesting story
Nice to see you writing again :P Aside from grammatical errors, this was an interesting story
2/23/2016 c1 
7the freelance dreamer
Darn rule (TT_TT)
Anyway, I'm looking forward to your story! I imagine it will be hilarious.
7the freelance dreamerDarn rule (TT_TT)
Anyway, I'm looking forward to your story! I imagine it will be hilarious.
2/16/2016 c1 catspats31
I like the writing quality of the story, but the story breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:
Entries not allowed:
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
To make this story in compliance with the site's rules, you can have the chat in your story and just have the characters discuss the chat and the ongoing stuff around it, referencing certain things said/done, without any of it being in chat form. Please make it so the chat/script portion doesn't exist at all.
Here is the background information about when the admins added the rule against chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries on September 12, 2002:
Chat room or keyboard dialogue based entries will no longer be allowed. Much of the chat room entries are void of plot, without attempt at plot and are more in line with random dialogue than with stories or poetry. Having these type of entries on the site is unfair to those that have spent quality time fleshing out substantial content.
I like the writing quality of the story, but the story breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:
Entries not allowed:
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
To make this story in compliance with the site's rules, you can have the chat in your story and just have the characters discuss the chat and the ongoing stuff around it, referencing certain things said/done, without any of it being in chat form. Please make it so the chat/script portion doesn't exist at all.
Here is the background information about when the admins added the rule against chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries on September 12, 2002:
Chat room or keyboard dialogue based entries will no longer be allowed. Much of the chat room entries are void of plot, without attempt at plot and are more in line with random dialogue than with stories or poetry. Having these type of entries on the site is unfair to those that have spent quality time fleshing out substantial content.
2/9/2016 c1 Guest
Ita probably just me but I feel like Sun is the youngest of the Twelve Holy Knights and all of them always worry over him. God, sun would've been adorable as a little brother in childhood but he'd be so troublesome when he got older
Ita probably just me but I feel like Sun is the youngest of the Twelve Holy Knights and all of them always worry over him. God, sun would've been adorable as a little brother in childhood but he'd be so troublesome when he got older
2/8/2016 c1 Guest
I love this
*Hopes this is being continued*
I love this
*Hopes this is being continued*
2/8/2016 c1 2Lazie Mie
I really like the story! So how do they access their fb? Was it through laptop or smartphone?
I do imagine Storm using his laptop, locked in his room and have a chat with the pope; discussing about paperwork while simultaneously join the online meeting worrying about their dear leader, though.
2Lazie MieI really like the story! So how do they access their fb? Was it through laptop or smartphone?
I do imagine Storm using his laptop, locked in his room and have a chat with the pope; discussing about paperwork while simultaneously join the online meeting worrying about their dear leader, though.