for Retribution4/6/2021 c6 Guest
This was shit.
This was shit.
4/6/2021 c5 Guest
meh
meh
3/16/2016 c6 
1axel100
This was a very schizophrenic chapter. Azula goes from the "big bad" to "cooperating sis" so fast that your readers (at least this one) were left disoriented. Azula can be manic, but your plot shouldn't be.
1axel100This was a very schizophrenic chapter. Azula goes from the "big bad" to "cooperating sis" so fast that your readers (at least this one) were left disoriented. Azula can be manic, but your plot shouldn't be.
3/12/2016 c5 84615192304
great chapter! looking forward to the next chapter and azula's eventual fate in this fanfic.
Plz don't kill her though.
84615192304great chapter! looking forward to the next chapter and azula's eventual fate in this fanfic.
Plz don't kill her though.
2/14/2016 c3 5Tyleepoof
I knew it. Azula's always one step ahead. The real question is why is part of Ozai's face melted off.
5TyleepoofI knew it. Azula's always one step ahead. The real question is why is part of Ozai's face melted off.
2/11/2016 c2 84615192304
WOAH... think the only thing missing from the end was "Dun...Dun...DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!
84615192304WOAH... think the only thing missing from the end was "Dun...Dun...DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!
2/9/2016 c1 Tyleepoof
I like this, a lot. I mean it's just so intriguing to me. I hope you write more soon.
I like this, a lot. I mean it's just so intriguing to me. I hope you write more soon.
2/9/2016 c1 84615192304
if you plan on finishing before part 3 comes out, you've got 7 weeks and 1 day starting from now.
now to the actual review, love this story already! :)
84615192304if you plan on finishing before part 3 comes out, you've got 7 weeks and 1 day starting from now.
now to the actual review, love this story already! :)