for Wrath of the Muggles2/15/2016 c3 HeartsGlow
The first two chapters were MUCH better written than this one. It was ... frenetic; and poorly written.
The first two chapters were MUCH better written than this one. It was ... frenetic; and poorly written.
2/15/2016 c3 Guest
Great work so far! Can't wait for the next installment.
Great work so far! Can't wait for the next installment.
2/15/2016 c3 lunaz
enjoyed this
enjoyed this
32/15/2016 c2 Lna Anwar
I like this SO much, it always seemed to upset me when wizard characters in the books/fanfics underestimate muggels, its really frustrating.
I like this SO much, it always seemed to upset me when wizard characters in the books/fanfics underestimate muggels, its really frustrating.
2/13/2016 c2 Pinkpower
Nice story, can't wait to see new chapter. However, please make chapters longer. I also hope that you will not forget the following things:
1) If muggles will start working on wizard world problem, it must not be on a local level (Many authors do this mistake quite often). There must be a coalition created with at least United States, Russian Federation. China and European Union countries as members (ideally - all the countries).
2) Most likely military and gov units equipment will work in "magic" zones as the majority of such equipment has protection against EMP (example: US Abrams and RF T-90 tanks and RF "Armata" vehicles (T-14 tank and T-15 APC) have this protection (Abrams and 90 - partial, "Armata" - full), another example: presidential jets).
3) Keeping the secrecy of wizard world is not possible anymore.
4) It is highly probable that after quick studying of magic, muggles will have some kind of counter-measures for it.
5) It is also quite probable that some wizards will start cooperating with muggle gouvernements so soon there will be something like infantry support battle mages from Shadowrun universe.
6) It will be a total fail to make muggle gov services the bad guys (also an often mistake)
Keep that in mind and this story will be really nice. Good luck with next chapters!
Nice story, can't wait to see new chapter. However, please make chapters longer. I also hope that you will not forget the following things:
1) If muggles will start working on wizard world problem, it must not be on a local level (Many authors do this mistake quite often). There must be a coalition created with at least United States, Russian Federation. China and European Union countries as members (ideally - all the countries).
2) Most likely military and gov units equipment will work in "magic" zones as the majority of such equipment has protection against EMP (example: US Abrams and RF T-90 tanks and RF "Armata" vehicles (T-14 tank and T-15 APC) have this protection (Abrams and 90 - partial, "Armata" - full), another example: presidential jets).
3) Keeping the secrecy of wizard world is not possible anymore.
4) It is highly probable that after quick studying of magic, muggles will have some kind of counter-measures for it.
5) It is also quite probable that some wizards will start cooperating with muggle gouvernements so soon there will be something like infantry support battle mages from Shadowrun universe.
6) It will be a total fail to make muggle gov services the bad guys (also an often mistake)
Keep that in mind and this story will be really nice. Good luck with next chapters!
2/10/2016 c1 Mystery0028
Are you an Indian too?
(To lazy to login)
Are you an Indian too?
(To lazy to login)
2/10/2016 c1 anotherboarduser
This idea is so interesting looking forward to reading this realistic story...
It is going to be fun reading how Harry and Hermione use their muggle knowledge...
Also, given how this is not a pureblood center story now, maybe Harry and Hermione would get together.
This idea is so interesting looking forward to reading this realistic story...
It is going to be fun reading how Harry and Hermione use their muggle knowledge...
Also, given how this is not a pureblood center story now, maybe Harry and Hermione would get together.