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3/17/2016 c1 PrinceDoebler
You're psychic. You predicted what would happen in chapter 65.

This was a fun read. But I think you should leave it as it is. Not many places you could really take it.
2/25/2016 c1 drago jsl
continĂșa la
2/19/2016 c1 Guest
Seems like a pretty good platform that you could work off of, hope to see more
2/15/2016 c1 2Comrade Redneck
This should absolutely continue on! It was wonderfully written, and I don't think Rito was OOC at all, so don't worry. There's way too few TLR stories in here, so seeing a good one is great news! Please continue on!
2/12/2016 c1 1L.B.N
Please continue
2/11/2016 c1 5magic135
great job, continue on if you get more ideas and make some stories about rito with one of the other girls.
2/11/2016 c1 1L.B.N
Like the story and like how you made your version of Rito.
2/10/2016 c1 15Miknel-san
Great story, it made me smile and laugh at certain points, and the explanation to why Rito trips makes a lot of sense.
2/10/2016 c1 7MODdenial
So...why the "M" rating?

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