for Shiki: Redemption3/14/2016 c9 
269Hawkflight7
I like the story so far, and how Natsuno seems to be developing feelings for Megumi. Really curious as to what direction you'll take this story and what us going to change.
At the moment though a lot of the chapters are mainly just repeats of scenes in the show. If you could add more to them or maybe see them through a different character's eyes it would make them more interesting as those parts are a bit boring since they're essentially repeats. Other than that, just keep up the good work .
269Hawkflight7I like the story so far, and how Natsuno seems to be developing feelings for Megumi. Really curious as to what direction you'll take this story and what us going to change.
At the moment though a lot of the chapters are mainly just repeats of scenes in the show. If you could add more to them or maybe see them through a different character's eyes it would make them more interesting as those parts are a bit boring since they're essentially repeats. Other than that, just keep up the good work .
3/3/2016 c9 omniXenderman
i like the way its going for now, but as always, please post longer chapters
i like the way its going for now, but as always, please post longer chapters
2/20/2016 c6 omniXenderman
an easy guide i use is to write 500 to a thousand words per day, youll get burnt out if you write it all at once but doing that will keep you a little bit hungry to write which will motivate you to do it tomorrow too, it will also leave room to inspire new ideas if you are excited or want to get writing again.
an easy guide i use is to write 500 to a thousand words per day, youll get burnt out if you write it all at once but doing that will keep you a little bit hungry to write which will motivate you to do it tomorrow too, it will also leave room to inspire new ideas if you are excited or want to get writing again.
2/20/2016 c3 omniXenderman
i like where this is going, and i cat wait to see how the deviation from the main story starts to unfold
i like where this is going, and i cat wait to see how the deviation from the main story starts to unfold
2/19/2016 c1 5fangs of death
This is a good story, is has a lot of potential. I believe there are a few grammar mistakes. I also like the pairs you have chosen for it. I just wish the chapters were a little longer.
5fangs of deathThis is a good story, is has a lot of potential. I believe there are a few grammar mistakes. I also like the pairs you have chosen for it. I just wish the chapters were a little longer.
2/15/2016 c1 5omniXenderman
like i said before, lots of potenial! good style, keep at it and it will be fantastic
5omniXendermanlike i said before, lots of potenial! good style, keep at it and it will be fantastic