for Harry the Idiot9/17/2016 c2 Mathus J. Donovan
Ohh, interesting.
I cannot tell you how glad I am that you have decided to continue this story.
In a subtle and affectionate way you capture the entire essence of what we see as Harmony Shippers. I personally believe that yes, in the canon series there are moments of affection past between Ron and Hermione. but, in truth, this is more sibling affection on their part. Their constant arguing and lack of shared interests, some more delusional fans, can proclaim that it is romantic, even flirtatious, but I personally, as a person who has a female sibling, I understand that you do 'not' insult, put down, or demand of your lover.
Your sibling, on the other hand, is a whole different story.
Harry has always been the right man for Hermione. They are practically the others missing half. When with Harry, as you showed here, Hermione is stronger, more affectionate, less of a (I hate this term) Know-It-All.
Harry himself, I' ve always felt, always drew strength from Hermione, he would literary walk through Hell-Fire and Brimstone for Hermione, and personally, I feel that affection is returned in spades, broken only by the disaster that was Half Blood Prince.
I know I am preaching to the converted, but I just wanted to point out how on point you are with this story.
Yes, I personally think Hermione would draw more comfort from Ron after being tortured by Bellatrix. It is what siblings do, they comfort each other in times of need. No one would want to show how damaged you are after such an ordeal to their soulmate, lover, or partner. Over the space of seven novels (Not including that FanFiction The Cursed Child) Hermione hs always been Harry's foundation stone. She knows he has to face an ordeal even greater than the one she faces, this exhibits her selfless behaviour and affection greatly.
I'm not saying Hermione would never share deeply troubling emotions to Harry, but she does not know how he feels about her and you can tell she is scared of destroying their friendship for her own desires, Great job in evoking such thoughts from such a short chapter, you have an eye for H/Hr.
I look forward to more from you.
MJD
Ohh, interesting.
I cannot tell you how glad I am that you have decided to continue this story.
In a subtle and affectionate way you capture the entire essence of what we see as Harmony Shippers. I personally believe that yes, in the canon series there are moments of affection past between Ron and Hermione. but, in truth, this is more sibling affection on their part. Their constant arguing and lack of shared interests, some more delusional fans, can proclaim that it is romantic, even flirtatious, but I personally, as a person who has a female sibling, I understand that you do 'not' insult, put down, or demand of your lover.
Your sibling, on the other hand, is a whole different story.
Harry has always been the right man for Hermione. They are practically the others missing half. When with Harry, as you showed here, Hermione is stronger, more affectionate, less of a (I hate this term) Know-It-All.
Harry himself, I' ve always felt, always drew strength from Hermione, he would literary walk through Hell-Fire and Brimstone for Hermione, and personally, I feel that affection is returned in spades, broken only by the disaster that was Half Blood Prince.
I know I am preaching to the converted, but I just wanted to point out how on point you are with this story.
Yes, I personally think Hermione would draw more comfort from Ron after being tortured by Bellatrix. It is what siblings do, they comfort each other in times of need. No one would want to show how damaged you are after such an ordeal to their soulmate, lover, or partner. Over the space of seven novels (Not including that FanFiction The Cursed Child) Hermione hs always been Harry's foundation stone. She knows he has to face an ordeal even greater than the one she faces, this exhibits her selfless behaviour and affection greatly.
I'm not saying Hermione would never share deeply troubling emotions to Harry, but she does not know how he feels about her and you can tell she is scared of destroying their friendship for her own desires, Great job in evoking such thoughts from such a short chapter, you have an eye for H/Hr.
I look forward to more from you.
MJD
9/6/2016 c3 Deathday Party Planner
Very nice beginning! I look forward to reading more; thank you for sharing your lovely muse!
Very nice beginning! I look forward to reading more; thank you for sharing your lovely muse!
9/4/2016 c1 Goose
Never have understood why people use that "uncomplicated, easy" nonsense as a negative trait for a relationship. Who the fuck wants pointless problems and drama all the time? This is why most people can't land a good relationship.
Never have understood why people use that "uncomplicated, easy" nonsense as a negative trait for a relationship. Who the fuck wants pointless problems and drama all the time? This is why most people can't land a good relationship.
8/31/2016 c1 
5Proganthony
Actually Harry is an idiot for not seeing the importance of Hermione AND Luna.
5ProganthonyActually Harry is an idiot for not seeing the importance of Hermione AND Luna.
8/18/2016 c1 Mathus J. Donovan
Oh my
Cheesy is something I will never label at a Harmony story, in fact I was hoping, now that I see this, that you would write maybe a sequel, or maybe a second chapter. Sorry, my mind is racing with ideas here, you really could do a lot with this idea.
But then again, this is your story, and if you want to leave it here, then i respect that.
Great Job
Oh my
Cheesy is something I will never label at a Harmony story, in fact I was hoping, now that I see this, that you would write maybe a sequel, or maybe a second chapter. Sorry, my mind is racing with ideas here, you really could do a lot with this idea.
But then again, this is your story, and if you want to leave it here, then i respect that.
Great Job
2/20/2016 c1 Skye
Not bad. Personally, I do agree about Hermione being underappreciated, but you have to admit that she's still a bossy, narrow-minded, unperceptive know-it-all!
Not bad. Personally, I do agree about Hermione being underappreciated, but you have to admit that she's still a bossy, narrow-minded, unperceptive know-it-all!
2/19/2016 c1 anotherboarduser
Good story
Maybe you can write a sequel on how Harry and Hermione get together.
Good story
Maybe you can write a sequel on how Harry and Hermione get together.
2/18/2016 c1 merlin
Very nice story. Your observation are correct. Harry really is an idiot sometimes
Very nice story. Your observation are correct. Harry really is an idiot sometimes