for FitzSimmons Secret Valentine2/20/2016 c1 Crystabel.Shalott
Wow, this was amazing to read and such a lovely way to start the day with :) First of all thank you for this fic, I really enjoyed it. What I like is the way you developed the prompt it was very original and I wouldn't have expected it to be developed to you, it was a lovely surprise, so kudos for that. The way you put it and how his moment with Jemma in the lab triggered a memory of his parents was nice and again pretty interesting and unexpected to read (unexpected mainly because I would have never thought about writing it in a story, it would have never come up in my mind). Loved what Fitz said at the ending :) GREAT JOB! (sorry that this review is a mess)
Wow, this was amazing to read and such a lovely way to start the day with :) First of all thank you for this fic, I really enjoyed it. What I like is the way you developed the prompt it was very original and I wouldn't have expected it to be developed to you, it was a lovely surprise, so kudos for that. The way you put it and how his moment with Jemma in the lab triggered a memory of his parents was nice and again pretty interesting and unexpected to read (unexpected mainly because I would have never thought about writing it in a story, it would have never come up in my mind). Loved what Fitz said at the ending :) GREAT JOB! (sorry that this review is a mess)
2/19/2016 c1 
56CreativeReading
I absolutely adored it! Great use of the interview format and I loved the way that you connected Leo's childhood memories with a specific memory of Jemma to make him realize how he felt about her. Thank you so much for sharing this sweet story!
56CreativeReadingI absolutely adored it! Great use of the interview format and I loved the way that you connected Leo's childhood memories with a specific memory of Jemma to make him realize how he felt about her. Thank you so much for sharing this sweet story!