6/15/2016 c1 16SuperWolf1967
This would have been a good story except your writing skills suck. I am sorry but its the truth. You were missing words and your grammar overall was terrible. Next time you write a story reread maybe reread multiple times but if your wording was better than this story would be much easier to read.
This would have been a good story except your writing skills suck. I am sorry but its the truth. You were missing words and your grammar overall was terrible. Next time you write a story reread maybe reread multiple times but if your wording was better than this story would be much easier to read.