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2/28/2016 c1 5HinaGuy749
Marvelous! Simply marvelous! Considering this is only your second story (I count your actual second as part of your first) you are making amazing progress in your writing. Your pacing is much better, allowing the characters to be properly fleshed out. The dialogue is much improved, not just having the basics to get a point across and really bring the characters to life. As for the story itself, I'm already enjoying the plot as even though it's not the most original setup as far as I seen just yet, it goes a step beyond what I've seen other do with it and really makes me want to read more as I can see that you're putting a lot of effort into creating something good. Keep up the great work as I see a lot of talent and potential here.
2/27/2016 c4 tlc125
Brilliant.
2/27/2016 c4 15Vegasman59
Great story, I can't wait for more!
2/27/2016 c3 tlc125
You are very good as a storyteller. I'm thoroughly enjoying this. Thanks.
2/27/2016 c2 tlc125
Very nice!
2/27/2016 c1 tlc125
I like this so far. Thanks for sharing.
2/26/2016 c4 starboy454
good update
2/23/2016 c1 2AnacDian
Lovely story(s) so far. I'm looking forward to what will happen with Catherine. Thanks for writing - Anac
2/22/2016 c1 4HarryHermioneEdwardBella
awesome start
2/21/2016 c1 redwolf23456
Great story so far
2/20/2016 c1 3desireejones99
interesting start
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