for That artsy kid (Billdip AU)10/24/2021 c15 alloystar
Poor little Pine Tree.
I love it but again, please fix the spelling mistakes and stop using screamed so much!
Poor little Pine Tree.
I love it but again, please fix the spelling mistakes and stop using screamed so much!
10/24/2021 c8 alloystar
Spelling and grammar, people. It's not that difficult to get spellcheck software, and Grammarly does actually help me a lot, I make tons of spelling mistakes.
Spelling and grammar, people. It's not that difficult to get spellcheck software, and Grammarly does actually help me a lot, I make tons of spelling mistakes.
10/23/2021 c3 alloystar
I mean it's good but your spelling and grammar could use some improvement.
Also, stop using screamed so much, it's annoying and not the right word to use in most scenes.
Other than that excellent fic with an excellent plot.
I mean it's good but your spelling and grammar could use some improvement.
Also, stop using screamed so much, it's annoying and not the right word to use in most scenes.
Other than that excellent fic with an excellent plot.
9/26/2021 c16 alloystar
So I only just noticed this but you spell Mabel wrong. It's M-A-B-E-L not M-A-B-L-E.
Just a heads up
So I only just noticed this but you spell Mabel wrong. It's M-A-B-E-L not M-A-B-L-E.
Just a heads up
3/1/2021 c28 
6phineashiccup
I wonder what Bill and Dipper are going to do about Bill's parents after that? Can't wait to read another chapter.
6phineashiccupI wonder what Bill and Dipper are going to do about Bill's parents after that? Can't wait to read another chapter.
11/17/2018 c28 DaliaCipher
*Stares at screen* that was beautiful. You are really good at writing these!
*Stares at screen* that was beautiful. You are really good at writing these!
7/8/2018 c27 DDemon
I love your story... Thank you. But as well... I need action. 3
I love your story... Thank you. But as well... I need action. 3
4/18/2018 c27 Guest
I has to re-read this because its awesome, I wish this was a TV show
I has to re-read this because its awesome, I wish this was a TV show