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2/2/2019 c17 Jen
Thank you
2/2/2019 c16 Jen
This is a great story
2/2/2019 c3 Jen
Good story
2/24/2017 c17 10Cleavage Queen
Nice job!
Lot of twists & turns.
And, while a little rough, your English is probably better than some of the people whose first language is English!
9/27/2016 c17 Romanticaffair
I really enjoyed every detail in this fiction and i loved the ending. Can't wait to read the sequel.
6/2/2016 c17 Love-is-the-answer-80
I really enjoyed this fiction. Can't wait to read more. I loved your writing style.
5/23/2016 c17 waiTing fOr U
A lovely story. I loved the ending. McGee is my favorite too
4/12/2016 c17 wolverine 1989
An interesting story and a great complicated plot. I really liked that each chapter is full of events nothing boring here, i read each and every word. i have read a few McGee stories that shows him as a total helpless loser who needs protection, but here the McGee character is valued and presented as a tough unbreakable person who knows what he wants.
To tell you the truth i'm not a McGee fan, i mean he's nice and everything, but i'm a DiNozzo and i always read DiNozzo fiction but i liked this one.
Great story.
4/11/2016 c17 SuperMario Italy
I really loved the story and i would love to read a sequel for it.
4/10/2016 c17 murphy9202
I really liked the story. Will you be writing a sequel?
4/7/2016 c1 Guest
I like it thnx
4/4/2016 c17 Guest
A lovely story and a Good ending
4/3/2016 c17 Detective Mario
Stew should have been punched in the face for what he did. Tim should have done that
Anyway i enjoyed this fiction. Are you gonna write a sequel for this story soon?
4/3/2016 c9 JerrytheKing 197
So far so good. i like your writing style very interesting. Poor Tim :(
Abby please get lost, you don't deserve Tim
4/1/2016 c1 aimaru
Hi. I really enjoyed your story. Hope to see more.
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