
2/26/2016 c1
13nahte123456
Yeah while I never bought Molly being some evil women, she's REALLY over-bearing. there are times where Harry and Sirius should both just despise her.

Yeah while I never bought Molly being some evil women, she's REALLY over-bearing. there are times where Harry and Sirius should both just despise her.
2/26/2016 c1 Ann Jinn
Agree, I could not stand how Molly treated Sirius. Nowhere else could she act like that and treat him so badly.
Lovely story. Actually what good did Snape do? He didn't really have information, just seemed to shuttle between the two, Dumbledore and Volde.
Thought the good things that happened to Harry was an excellent idea.
Agree, I could not stand how Molly treated Sirius. Nowhere else could she act like that and treat him so badly.
Lovely story. Actually what good did Snape do? He didn't really have information, just seemed to shuttle between the two, Dumbledore and Volde.
Thought the good things that happened to Harry was an excellent idea.
2/26/2016 c1
3ObsessedWithHPFanFic
Fun story and great that Sirius actually acted as Head of House. Thanks for sharing!

Fun story and great that Sirius actually acted as Head of House. Thanks for sharing!
2/26/2016 c1
6Bellanaris
I love this take on it. I completely agree that Sirius needed to slap Molly down. I never liked that in Order of the Phoenix.

I love this take on it. I completely agree that Sirius needed to slap Molly down. I never liked that in Order of the Phoenix.
2/26/2016 c1 Noble Korhedron
Yeah, it bothered me too, but I didn't realise it 'til after I'd read the thing. Thanks! :-D
Yeah, it bothered me too, but I didn't realise it 'til after I'd read the thing. Thanks! :-D
2/26/2016 c1 Guest
I wish you went into more detail of how things changed later, this is really cool.
I wish you went into more detail of how things changed later, this is really cool.
2/26/2016 c1 InAnnaCat
What a wonderful story! I agree all the mistakes are your and so is all the creativaty which made this wonderful story. Now don't take this the wrong way. I do not know how to make stories but I do have ideas to put into stories. If I had done this story I would have done a few things different. When Surius claimed the house and made Belatrix a squib. For a joke Surius could do magic that makes Belatrix a slave to the house of black and she must do all orders and she cannot harm anybody including herself. Then Surius has his elf ask permission to visit Augusta Longbottom. The elf ask Augusta to allow Surius to visit her provided he gives a magical oath that he is inocent of the crimes he is accused of and harbors no ill will to the longbottoms. Surius visits and gives the oaths and tells Augusta that he has taken the headship of the Black House and stripped Belatrix of her money and magic and made her a slave to the house of Black. Surius offers to transfer this slave to the house of Longbottom in reparation that Belatrix did to the Longbottoms. Augusta accepts and Belatrix becomes a slave to the house of Longbottom. She thanks Surius profusely. Surius then goes back home and he arrives to catch the twins performing a prank upon him. They turn him into a loves the prank and decides to take them as apprentises to prank the dark lord and DEs after he reveals that he is a marauder. Of course the twins are delighted to be apprentissed to him. Then the war effort is contributed by pranks and he and the weasley become the infamous prank lord and his heirs. They include moony in this effort. Then after Surius is free they start a prank shop with the twins.
What a wonderful story! I agree all the mistakes are your and so is all the creativaty which made this wonderful story. Now don't take this the wrong way. I do not know how to make stories but I do have ideas to put into stories. If I had done this story I would have done a few things different. When Surius claimed the house and made Belatrix a squib. For a joke Surius could do magic that makes Belatrix a slave to the house of black and she must do all orders and she cannot harm anybody including herself. Then Surius has his elf ask permission to visit Augusta Longbottom. The elf ask Augusta to allow Surius to visit her provided he gives a magical oath that he is inocent of the crimes he is accused of and harbors no ill will to the longbottoms. Surius visits and gives the oaths and tells Augusta that he has taken the headship of the Black House and stripped Belatrix of her money and magic and made her a slave to the house of Black. Surius offers to transfer this slave to the house of Longbottom in reparation that Belatrix did to the Longbottoms. Augusta accepts and Belatrix becomes a slave to the house of Longbottom. She thanks Surius profusely. Surius then goes back home and he arrives to catch the twins performing a prank upon him. They turn him into a loves the prank and decides to take them as apprentises to prank the dark lord and DEs after he reveals that he is a marauder. Of course the twins are delighted to be apprentissed to him. Then the war effort is contributed by pranks and he and the weasley become the infamous prank lord and his heirs. They include moony in this effort. Then after Surius is free they start a prank shop with the twins.