
6/16/2023 c20
1Sunphire
I started following this story at its start and I'm happy to see it's been updated since then. I'm hoping to see it finished some day but so far, I love every bit of this story. I can't wait to read more. :) 3

I started following this story at its start and I'm happy to see it's been updated since then. I'm hoping to see it finished some day but so far, I love every bit of this story. I can't wait to read more. :) 3
1/16/2022 c12
18Loveless Demon
That was sad but it was also a mercy. I always felt sorry for him, he got corrupted and torn from the light he should have lived in.

That was sad but it was also a mercy. I always felt sorry for him, he got corrupted and torn from the light he should have lived in.
1/10/2022 c20 HeyZeus13
I just found this story and for it to end on such a cliff hanger and no update since August makes me want to cry! You're an amazing writer!
I just found this story and for it to end on such a cliff hanger and no update since August makes me want to cry! You're an amazing writer!
8/27/2020 c20 O Desperado Sweetie O
Will Bilbo be the one to destroy the ring or still leave it for Frodo? It seems such a shame for him to leave it for Frodo when he already knows what evil it contains and whose it belongs to.
Will Bilbo be the one to destroy the ring or still leave it for Frodo? It seems such a shame for him to leave it for Frodo when he already knows what evil it contains and whose it belongs to.
8/27/2020 c12 O Desperado Sweetie O
Umm, you didn't specify it, but did Bilbo take the ring or leave it on the ground?
Umm, you didn't specify it, but did Bilbo take the ring or leave it on the ground?
8/27/2020 c10 O Desperado Sweetie O
What does Bakanijalagjijiid-aznan mean? You forgot to translate it. :-(
What does Bakanijalagjijiid-aznan mean? You forgot to translate it. :-(
8/27/2020 c8 O Desperado Sweetie O
I am not really versed on Elves other than those in The Hobbit and LOTR, but isn't Glorfindel a female and Elrond's wife? I thought that I seen that when I goggled Elrond's family tree.
I am not really versed on Elves other than those in The Hobbit and LOTR, but isn't Glorfindel a female and Elrond's wife? I thought that I seen that when I goggled Elrond's family tree.
8/27/2020 c7 O Desperado Sweetie O
You forgot to finish this sentence:
Thorin watched the Halfing-Hobbit go with a frown. Worry niggled in his mind as he watched the small creature leave with a slight hitch to his stop, his face weary as he looked at the others. Thorin could silently admit that he had misjudged the hobbit. He was not as incompentent as he first thought, not
with his words at any rate, be he would still have to prove his worth in weaponry. Anyone could carry a blade but it takes skill to
Also, "not with his words at any rate, be he would still have to prove his worth in weaponry." be should be but.
I am enjoying this story greatly! :-D
You forgot to finish this sentence:
Thorin watched the Halfing-Hobbit go with a frown. Worry niggled in his mind as he watched the small creature leave with a slight hitch to his stop, his face weary as he looked at the others. Thorin could silently admit that he had misjudged the hobbit. He was not as incompentent as he first thought, not
with his words at any rate, be he would still have to prove his worth in weaponry. Anyone could carry a blade but it takes skill to
Also, "not with his words at any rate, be he would still have to prove his worth in weaponry." be should be but.
I am enjoying this story greatly! :-D